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Smoke And Mirrors - Channelling in the Spirit of Edgar Allan Poe - A Musical Video- POTD


POTD June 15 2025

Smoke And Mirrors – Channelling in the Spirit of Edgar Allan Poe

When regulation picks at pillaged dreams The searchlight shines its brutal beams As shadows spill its borrowed light. judgement retains its fractured fight. A blind eye turns as life disbands the gavel strikes by unseen hands, The scales unbalanced - Truth? Hard to reach, Sold by madness - Bought too cheap. The quiet march, unheard, unseen. Its tragic tears the Mirror weeps Not passive but so raw so deep Elected lunacy serves the machine. They crawl they pray, to rise to kneel The patterns, the laws, the ancient sincerity Buried beneath this man-made inaccuracy. To come ~ to go ~ to stay ~ to stray? Freedom feels so far away.
I have intentionally not included the lyrics on this Video Musical so as not to distract you from the video and music. I invite you to make your own interpretation on this and let me know in the comments either here or on YouTube, it would be awesome if you commented on both. You can follow the lyrics on the subtitles of the video or if wish you can see the transcript on the YouTube video itself. I asked for my subscribers to comment on what their explanation were. I’m pasting Freddy Max’s very astute and comprehensive comment which I think was the best. Freddy is an excellent lyricist and composer in his own right - @FreddyMaxOfficial YouTube comment I am absolutely moved by this song and video, as it vividly captures what I know as the “dark night of the soul” or the descent into shadow where ego identities begin to dissolve, and everything that once defined us starts to feel hollow and unfamiliar. Listening to “Smoke and Mirrors” felt like standing at the edge of an inner threshold or the moment where the self begins to unravel not out of despair, but out of necessity. Spiritually, it felt like a sacred shedding where the names, roles, and voices I once clung to quietly surrendered to something truer beneath. The mirror in the song is not just reflective, it’s transformative. It weeps, it distorts, but it also invites. It asks, “Who are you beneath all this?” The video feels like a dark initiation. Not darkness as evil, but as mystery, or perhaps the fertile, uncomfortable silence where old identities die and the true self begins to emerge. Letting go of identities that no longer serve is one of the scariest paths we walk, but this piece reminded me that we are never alone in that journey. "Smoke and Mirrors" carries the weight of unravelling with reverence, never forcing closure or dimming the mystery, but simply holds the silence long enough for truth to surface. Bravo! Bravo! Bravo!

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Date: 8/2/2025 9:11:00 AM
Maria this is outstanding work, love everything the music, vocals, video was truly captivating. Isn't it wonderful how music adds so much to the feel of lyrics?
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Date: 7/4/2025 11:51:00 PM
Hello Maria, I can see a soupmail from you but It won't go dark green and open.' I guess its an Answer to mine.? Have a good evening.'
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Date: 6/25/2025 8:17:00 PM
The video is hauntingly beautiful.
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Date: 7/1/2025 5:21:00 AM
Thanks so much Richard. I appreciate the return visit ...Hugs
Date: 6/25/2025 8:14:00 PM
Big congratulations on being honoured with POTD. Well deserved dear friend. Hugs Rick.
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Date: 7/1/2025 5:22:00 AM
Dear Richard thanks so much my friend. So glad you liked it...Hugs
Date: 6/23/2025 9:27:00 PM
Sweet Maria, your poem is so profound with an open ending so that the viewers can relate to it at many levels. Within all of us there reside the twin entities of darkness and light. We all wrestle with them. Finally what wins matters. When the searchlight shines its brutal beams, we see our vane dreams pillaged and realize that we have been lurking in a world of shadows. This can be a moment of disillusionment and we are compelled to understand us better and make a fresh attempt at discerning the truth. There is no need for despair or self- complacency. What is needed is a conscious effort to delve into the mystery of life’s true essence and escape from the bondage we are in. Unfortunately, freedom looks far away. A very powerful poem and the video, superb!
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Date: 6/25/2025 6:43:00 AM
Dear sweet Valsa, Sweet friend, thank you so much for your beautiful reflection — your words flow like poetry themselves. You’ve captured the core of the piece so eloquently — that inner tug-of-war between light and shadow, and the quiet hope that truth might still rise from it all. I love what you said about not giving in to despair, but instead making that conscious effort to seek what’s real. So grateful it resonated with you — and thank you for watching the video too! ....Hugs
Date: 6/23/2025 4:25:00 AM
G'day darl...Really i feel that colloquial address Is the better fitting one offering no pretesions.' Before I comment as this is A most intuitive and powerful piece from you..And I guess i know from where it is drawn.' I'll say no more on that.' Yet wish you strength And late long afternoons, wine festivals and speedboat rides.' Relaxed long weekends and Healing for our land.' All blessings to all there.'
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Date: 6/25/2025 6:46:00 AM
G’day to you too, my lovely friend — your words wrapped around me like a warm breeze. Thank you for tuning into the heart of the piece, and for the quiet understanding in what you didn’t say. Your wishes painted such a beautiful picture… late afternoons, wine, water, and a bit of peace — may we all find some of that. Sending the same blessings right back to you, with gratitude....Hugs
Date: 6/21/2025 4:48:00 AM
The last line “ freedom feels so far away” gosh that hits the soul so deep dear beautiful maria, a very well written lyric on a subject that many would be familiar with. As i watched the video i thought of how sometimes we feel stuck and the darkness that sometimes suffocate us. The melody is so very catchy and the opening lines and the vocals there is so very evocative and soul stirring! How deeply moving is this! I can listen to this all day and night! Brilliant and artistic work.Congratulations also on receiving potd! Pleasure always seeing you post on soup! Sending you light always
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Date: 6/25/2025 6:48:00 AM
Dear sweet Soul, thank you so much, my beautiful friend — your words mean the world to me. That last line came from a place deep, so knowing it resonated with you like that truly touches my heart. You’ve described the weight and beauty of the piece so tenderly — and to hear that you could listen all day and night… that’s the greatest gift a writer could hope for. Thank you for your kindness, your light, and your presence — always a pleasure to share space with you here...Love and Light always
Date: 6/20/2025 6:51:00 PM
Dear Maria, your poetry is always A-1 and beautifully written. Since you journeyed into the world of music into your poetry it has only gotten better. Cheers to you for your hard work and dedication with your poetry. Thanks so much for stopping by...sorry for not responding sooner...I've lost my mojo sort of speak...lol Hugs dear friend.
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Date: 6/25/2025 6:51:00 AM
Dear Charlie thank you so much — your words mean a lot to me. It’s been such a joy blending music and poetry — like they’ve been waiting to meet all along. And no worries at all… mojos wander sometimes, but they always find their way back (often when we least expect it . Sending hugs right back and wishing you a gentle creative breeze when you need it most....Hugs
Date: 6/19/2025 6:59:00 AM
Dear Maria, your poetry is flawless, and your story is charming and quirky. "It feels like freedom is so far away." Maria, this is the closest thing to the Supreme Truth. This work deftly combines fantastic elements with an ethereal, magical quality. Congratulations on the prize of POTD. Definitely earned it.
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Date: 6/20/2025 7:45:00 AM
Your comments are always so deep and uplifting Sotto and a heartfelt thank you for your support and encouragement. Hugs Maria
Date: 6/18/2025 4:55:00 PM
Dearest Maria I thought I had left a comment. I'm loosing my mind. Congratulations, I know I favored this. So well deserved by you and Ron. I am so happy it received POTD. Again congratulations on another marvelous video and lyrics...
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Date: 6/18/2025 11:00:00 PM
Thanks Michael, I really appreciate your visit as I know how busy you've been. Thanks once agian for being the supportive friend that you are. Say hi to Judy from both Ron and me...Hugs
Date: 6/18/2025 10:41:00 AM
so worthy of POTD's spot, maria...sweet congrats!
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Date: 6/18/2025 11:01:00 PM
Thanks so much dear Nettie. So glad you liked it...Hugs
Date: 6/18/2025 2:58:00 AM
Belated Congratulations Maria on a well deserved POTD! Debx
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Date: 6/18/2025 11:01:00 PM
Thanks so much dear Deb. So glad you liked it...Hugs
Date: 6/16/2025 12:33:00 PM
Back with congrats on POTD!
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Date: 6/18/2025 11:02:00 PM
Dear Kim, I truly appreciate the return visit , Thanks once again...Hugs
Date: 6/15/2025 7:46:00 PM
' The scales unbalanced - Truth? Hard to reach, freedom feels so far away. ' Seems many in the world are experiencing this. Sad indeed, because it's so easy to linger in the light, to take the right path. Your thoughts touch my heart so deeply, Maria. The Poe feel is definitely evident within, with the video and the music. Congratulations my dear friend, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. Hugs, Brandy
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Date: 6/18/2025 11:05:00 PM
Thank you so much, dear Brandy. Your words mean more than you know. Yes, the weight of truth and the longing for freedom feel so real right now. I’m truly touched that the Poe essence spoke to you—it lives in many of my shadows. Grateful for your kind heart and support...Hugs
Date: 6/15/2025 12:05:00 PM
Ah, Maria, the Poe touch--cynical, piercing, entranced by the collapse of reason--feels like an incantation whispered beneath a raven’s wing. The rhythm walks with that quiet dread. I love Poe, and I love your creation. Your final line lingers like a challenge, too--not just lament. Congrats on your POTD.
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Date: 6/18/2025 11:09:00 PM
Thank you so much, dear Micky Your words truly warmed my heart. It means a lot that the message,Poe channelled resonated with you—so many are feeling that same distance from truth and freedom. I’m so grateful you felt the emotion in the poem and the video. Your support and kindness mean the world to me.
Date: 6/15/2025 8:50:00 AM
WOW!!! Congratulations on your POTD win. I enjoyed reading your powerful write. Have a blessed day with your wonderful win............
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Date: 6/18/2025 11:11:00 PM
Dear Paula, thanks so much for the WOW, i'm very happy that you loved it as much as I enjoyed creating it. Appreciate the support...Hugs
Date: 6/15/2025 7:34:00 AM
'Freedom feels so far away' -- Nothing closer to the ultimate Truth than this, Maria. Congratulations on POTD, Gershon
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Date: 6/18/2025 11:12:00 PM
Dear Gershon, thanks so much both for the visit and appreciation. So glad it resonated ...Hugs
Date: 6/15/2025 6:10:00 AM
congrats on your POTD designation. You beautifully capture a deep message. Well done, Yellow Rose
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Date: 6/18/2025 11:13:00 PM
Dear Yellow Rose, thanks so much for both the visit and liking my poem and video...Hugs
Date: 6/15/2025 6:01:00 AM
Hello Maria, congratulations on your POTD win with your beautiful poem. Wishing you a wonderful day as you celebrate.
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Date: 6/18/2025 11:14:00 PM
Dear Zyrool, thanks so much for both the visit and liking my poem and video...Hugs
Date: 6/15/2025 5:49:00 AM
Dearest Maria, Your poem isn’t just dark for darkness’ sake but it’s honest, and that’s what makes it so powerful. “The scales unbalanced, Truth? Hard to reach, / Sold by madness—Bought too cheap.” That’s the world, isn’t it? You capture that sense of injustice and futility, but you do it with such musicality and rhythm that even the despair feels strangely beautiful. Congrats on POTD, Blessings, My Dear Maria, Daniel
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Date: 6/18/2025 11:16:00 PM
Dear Daniel, Your words truly touched me—thank you from the bottom of my heart. I try to write from a place of honesty, and it means so much to know that came through. This world can feel heavy with imbalance, but if we can give voice to that pain with rhythm and truth, perhaps it becomes a little more bearable. Your support and insight mean more than you know. Thank you for the blessings and kind wishes. Warmest to you always...Hugs
Date: 6/15/2025 5:39:00 AM
Enjoy your day in the sun Maria
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Date: 6/18/2025 11:16:00 PM
Dear Tom, thanks so much for the return visit, as you know i truly appreciate it...Hugs
Date: 6/15/2025 3:11:00 AM
- Congratulations on your p.o.t.d., Maria - A high grade on your poems :) - hugs
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Date: 6/18/2025 11:17:00 PM
Dear Anne-Lise, thanks so much my friend, I appreciate it...Hugs
Date: 6/15/2025 2:49:00 AM
Dear Maria, wow, this poem is an absolute masterpiece! Wow. It's so brilliantly written and the music is a cherry on top. Marvellous! Congratulations on POTD! Have a wonderful day! Best, Anne
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Date: 6/18/2025 11:19:00 PM
Dear Anne, thanks so much, I'm thrilled that you liked it so much...Hugs
Date: 6/15/2025 1:28:00 AM
Congratulations on such an amazing accomplishment earning potd! The lyrics are haunting and deep. The music was beautiful and powerful and the video was a perfect marriage! I appreciate your creativity and indeed had to read the lyrics again without the sound to not be so swept away by the catchy music. Hauntingly good!
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Date: 6/18/2025 11:21:00 PM
Dear Karen, Thank you so much for your beautiful message—it truly made my day. I’m so glad the lyrics and music spoke to you, and that you took the time to revisit the words on their own. That means more than I can say. Creating that balance between sound and story is always the goal, and your kind words reassure me it landed. I appreciate your support and encouragement deeply. ..Hugs
Date: 6/15/2025 1:17:00 AM
Marvellous Maria, I can relate to this, especially the last two lines. A fave for me. Congratulations on receiving the honour of poem of the day… Beryl
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Date: 6/18/2025 11:24:00 PM
Dear Beryl, Thank you so much for your kind words and for connecting with those closing lines—it's always so special when someone relates on a personal level. That inner pull between staying and straying is something many of us feel. I’m truly touched that this one spoke to you, and I’m grateful for your lovely message and support...Hugs
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