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Smiling Upon a Frown Fading

____________ With her smile taunting free, captivating.. infectious dimples pulled me in -helpless... away with the wind went the scowling dread deep wrinkle fear, curving light- vanished frown........ ________________________ Contest ~ "Smiles And Frowns" Poet ~ Rick Parise

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/25/2011 10:01:00 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved win in Michael's "Smiles and Frowns" contest ^Rick. Love, Carol

David Williams

Date: 7/24/2011 10:11:00 AM

hey Rick, congrats on your win, David

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/23/2011 3:48:00 PM

Congrats Rick on another wonderful win with this entertaining poetry my friend... luv..

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/23/2011 11:45:00 AM

oh, you did yours differently, I see. YOu made the frown VANISH at the end. Awesome, Rick. Congratulations in the contest!!

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 7/23/2011 10:53:00 AM

My congratulations on this win in the contest of Michael,Rick

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/19/2011 7:14:00 AM

Thank you for sharing your poetry with us today ^Rick. I enjoyed reading it and will be back again soon to read more. Love, Carol

Stephen Parker

Date: 7/18/2011 4:37:00 PM

The smooth transition from one extreme to the other extreme is deftly made. You draw an apt picture using veiled symbols.