Smiling Death

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" OBLIVION'S LAND " MY PHOTO, ©

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As the clock of war is loudly ticking Broader the smiles of death become For the passing away of souls is thinking Onto the oblivion’s horrific land! © Demetrios Trifiatis 27 October 2022

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Shirley Hawkins

Date: 10/27/2022 1:55:00 PM

It is tough to understand the world's state at this time. The title of your poem Smiling Death is apt, Demetrios. The longer the war lasts, the more people will die, and some would prefer Death to the living hell they are suffering in this unnecessary war. It is heartbreaking. Take care, Shirley

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 10/28/2022 12:55:00 PM

Shirley, my dear, thank you for your precious comment. Be blessed!

Sotto Poet

Date: 10/27/2022 8:57:00 AM

Dear friend and poet Demetrios, you have written an excellent poem. It is true that time is moving at such a rapid pace; hence, there is nothing that can be done to stop the insanity. The forces of evil will never triumph, but my good friend, the world needs to understand your admonition.

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 10/28/2022 12:55:00 PM

My friend, Lasaad, thank you for your heartfelt comment. Be blessed!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/27/2022 7:02:00 AM

- The clock is ticking very fast and loud... scary - When madness is allowed to do as it pleases... the sun disappears on the horizon - Excellent written - hugs

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 10/28/2022 12:53:00 PM

Thank you so much, dearest, Ane-Lise! Hugs xxx

Vijay Pandit

Date: 10/27/2022 5:54:00 AM

The world should heed your warning my friend. Lovely colors in your garden.

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 10/27/2022 6:36:00 AM

Unfortunately, the greatest part of the world is dealing with its own problems, underestimating the global issues, my dearest friend, Vijay. Thank you for caring. Be blessed!