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Smiles Or Frowns a Double Tetractys

Laughs
Turn to
Child like smiles
When you’re with me
Smiles filled with joy when we have time alone
Sadness reclaims the smiles when you’re away
Frowns find their way
From my face
To my 
Heart 
  AgMoore© 07/20/11 










 for the Smiles and frowns contest (Tetractys )  by Amanda Moore 

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Carol Eastman Date: 6/12/2012 12:37:00 PM Great featured poem. Excellent work. Login to Reply

Kabuteng P.Ink K. Date: 7/25/2011 11:42:00 AM This sure warms the heart, Amanda-- sounds like a wonderful person, beautiful message in your tetractys -- really liked your take on the challenge :) Oh shucks, I just saw Susan's comment below...I definitely think this is a winner too! Plus I love your attitude about writing for contests! Way to go for you :D Login to Reply Amanda Moore Date: 7/25/2011 1:54:00 PM Nikko you're awesome thanks so much! Winning is a bonus but the true pleasure is in the writing and the challenge, AND the great community here!

Black Eyed Susan Date: 7/23/2011 10:50:00 AM I was looking for your name on the winner's list and I couldn't believe it wasn't there! yours is just as good, if not better, than some of the winners. i feel like you got gipped. anyway, just know that someone out there, me, loves this! Login to Reply Amanda Moore Date: 7/24/2011 12:05:00 AM Oh Susan thank you so much it's not about the winning it's about the writing! ((((hugs))))

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 7/22/2011 9:55:00 AM When we are separated from someone who is the light of our life, this is just how it feels, Amanda. Wonderful entry for the Smiles and Frowns contest and I wish you success! Love, Carolyn Login to Reply Amanda Moore Date: 7/24/2011 12:03:00 AM Carolyn so true, fortunately I am not writing from experience and I thank you for the well wishes!

Caryl Ramsdale Date: 7/22/2011 9:20:00 AM Amanda: The Tetractys poetry form is one of my favorites and you made it work for what could be the winning entry. Thanks for the delightful comment. Caryl Login to Reply Amanda Moore Date: 7/23/2011 11:51:00 PM Caryl thank you so much I love this form as well!

Sidney Hall Mad Poet Date: 7/21/2011 8:56:00 PM Wow Amanda, this is definately a winner. thanks for your comment Login to Reply Amanda Moore Date: 7/23/2011 11:49:00 PM Sidney thank you for the vote of confidence!

Susan Buchel Date: 7/21/2011 6:50:00 PM wow. this would be a challenge to compose, delightful product! Login to Reply Amanda Moore Date: 7/21/2011 7:10:00 PM Thanks so Much Susan, it is not really that hard when working with syllables you'd have fun with this!

James Fraser Date: 7/21/2011 1:44:00 PM Wonderful Tetractys Amanda, a joy to read :) Login to Reply Amanda Moore Date: 7/21/2011 2:04:00 PM James thanks I might have to do a nothter one they're lots of fun!

Black Eyed Susan Date: 7/21/2011 8:38:00 AM this is awesome! especially the ending! I don't know how he wouldn't like this :) Login to Reply Amanda Moore Date: 7/21/2011 2:01:00 PM Thanks Susan You're sweet!

Doris Culverhouse Date: 7/20/2011 5:51:00 PM enjoyed reading today....sounds like a winner!! Login to Reply Amanda Moore Date: 7/20/2011 8:00:00 PM Oh Doris thanks this was a lot of fun to wrote!