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Smiles or Frowns A Double Tetractys

Laughs Turn to Child like smiles When you’re with me Smiles filled with joy when we have time alone Sadness reclaims the smiles when you’re away Frowns find their way From my face To my Heart
AgMoore© 07/20/11
for the Smiles and frowns contest (Tetractys ) by Amanda Moore

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 6/12/2012 12:37:00 PM
Great featured poem. Excellent work.
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Date: 7/25/2011 11:42:00 AM
This sure warms the heart, Amanda-- sounds like a wonderful person, beautiful message in your tetractys -- really liked your take on the challenge :) Oh shucks, I just saw Susan's comment below...I definitely think this is a winner too! Plus I love your attitude about writing for contests! Way to go for you :D
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Amanda Moore
Date: 7/25/2011 1:54:00 PM
Nikko you're awesome thanks so much! Winning is a bonus but the true pleasure is in the writing and the challenge, AND the great community here!
Date: 7/23/2011 10:50:00 AM
I was looking for your name on the winner's list and I couldn't believe it wasn't there! yours is just as good, if not better, than some of the winners. i feel like you got gipped. anyway, just know that someone out there, me, loves this!
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Amanda Moore
Date: 7/24/2011 12:05:00 AM
Oh Susan thank you so much it's not about the winning it's about the writing! ((((hugs))))
Date: 7/22/2011 9:55:00 AM
When we are separated from someone who is the light of our life, this is just how it feels, Amanda. Wonderful entry for the Smiles and Frowns contest and I wish you success! Love, Carolyn
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Amanda Moore
Date: 7/24/2011 12:03:00 AM
Carolyn so true, fortunately I am not writing from experience and I thank you for the well wishes!
Date: 7/22/2011 9:20:00 AM
Amanda: The Tetractys poetry form is one of my favorites and you made it work for what could be the winning entry. Thanks for the delightful comment. Caryl
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Amanda Moore
Date: 7/23/2011 11:51:00 PM
Caryl thank you so much I love this form as well!
Date: 7/21/2011 8:56:00 PM
Wow Amanda, this is definately a winner. thanks for your comment
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Amanda Moore
Date: 7/23/2011 11:49:00 PM
Sidney thank you for the vote of confidence!
Date: 7/21/2011 6:50:00 PM
wow. this would be a challenge to compose, delightful product!
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Amanda Moore
Date: 7/21/2011 7:10:00 PM
Thanks so Much Susan, it is not really that hard when working with syllables you'd have fun with this!
Date: 7/21/2011 1:44:00 PM
Wonderful Tetractys Amanda, a joy to read :)
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Amanda Moore
Date: 7/21/2011 2:04:00 PM
James thanks I might have to do a nothter one they're lots of fun!
Date: 7/21/2011 8:38:00 AM
this is awesome! especially the ending! I don't know how he wouldn't like this :)
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Amanda Moore
Date: 7/21/2011 2:01:00 PM
Thanks Susan You're sweet!
Date: 7/20/2011 5:51:00 PM
enjoyed reading today....sounds like a winner!!
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Amanda Moore
Date: 7/20/2011 8:00:00 PM
Oh Doris thanks this was a lot of fun to wrote!