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Written 29th June 2025

What makes me smile is a bright sunny day When all of one’s cares are taken away Seeing laden trees covered in green leaves Shimmering in a soothing gentle breeze. I smile when I see a downpour of rain Knowing that the earth’s been refreshed again That crops will grow, flowers will survive too Our world doth become a beautiful view. I smile for today, as it’s a day of rest A day for us wearing our Sunday best Wherever you go, whatever you do May today bring a smile for each of you.

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Bill Baker

Date: 7/18/2025 2:09:00 PM

Very uplifting and well-written poetry, Beryl. Thanks for the smiles, my friend. Bill

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 7/18/2025 3:24:00 PM

Thank you Bill, keep smiling too… Beryl

Christopher Delegans

Date: 7/7/2025 10:34:00 PM

Very nice, Beryl. This is so positive in a genuinely inspiring way.

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 7/8/2025 12:08:00 AM

Thank you Christopher, much appreciated. Beryl

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 6/30/2025 6:16:00 AM

All good reasons to smile. In fact your poem brought me a smile.

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 6/30/2025 6:23:00 AM

Pleased this poem brought you a smile. Thank you Richard… Beryl

Daisy Meadows

Date: 6/30/2025 12:01:00 AM

A lovely poem!! Beautifully written!!

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 6/30/2025 12:07:00 AM

I appreciate your kind words Daisy, thank you… Beryl

Jaymee Thomas

Date: 6/29/2025 11:44:00 AM

I've really enjoyed reading all of the make me smile poems. It's nice to see what lights up a person from the inside. Have a wonderful day :)

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 6/29/2025 11:48:00 PM

Thank you Jaymee, have a wonderful too :) Beryl

Susan Ashley

Date: 6/29/2025 9:54:00 AM

Dear Beryl, the beautiful, sunny spirit of your poem made me smile today. Splendid thoughts so poetically expressed. An inspiration! Warmest wishes, my poet friend.. ~Susan

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 6/29/2025 11:46:00 PM

Thank you very much Susan, appreciated… Beryl

Valsa George

Date: 6/29/2025 6:16:00 AM

A very uplifting poem . A sunny day will surely light up our moods and spark a smile in us. Sunday is a day of rest and the very thought makes us smile. Beautifully written, dear Beryl. All the Best.

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 6/29/2025 8:49:00 AM

Thank you Valsa. All the best to you too… Beryl