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The sky was dark and gray, It was so gloomy. The all of a sudden in a flash, The sky broke and droplets of water, descended out the sky The water was in the shape of a smile . I couldn't believe my eyes. In was pouring down smiles. All that were sad were instantly happy, because they got in- fused with a smile. Alexis Y. 11/19/19

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Date: 11/22/2019 4:05:00 PM
:-) I hope this smile brings you happiness for your light brings me sight! What a great writer you are! Always making me smile even thought the darkness!
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Date: 11/20/2019 8:28:00 PM
to find the beauty in even rain is wonderful.... lovely write Alexis :) hugs
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Date: 11/20/2019 6:31:00 AM
Lovely, interesting write. … Bless you dear friend, Gina
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Date: 11/19/2019 4:20:00 PM
lovely ending...
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Date: 11/19/2019 1:31:00 PM
What a pretty poem, soft and alluring - I love it Alexis. I enjoy watching storms and the lightening and thunder and the immense awesome power that booms across the sky. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 11/19/2019 12:41:00 PM
The rain is nice to see from inside lol, even better when it produces a rainbow. Tom
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Date: 11/19/2019 9:55:00 AM
I love this Alexis! It has me smiling on this rainy day here now. Thanks for sharing :)
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Date: 11/19/2019 9:32:00 AM
It is so nice when a rain storm smiles on your day. Really nicely done Alexis.
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Chris Green
Date: 11/19/2019 2:37:00 PM
Thank you my friend. That is such a nice thing.
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Alexis Y.
Date: 11/19/2019 12:46:00 PM
Hi Chris, I am so happy that you were the first to comment. Because you were the inspiration for. I am pleased that you like it. Have a great day my friend:-) Alexis

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