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Smile and Lie

how do you show a smile and lie to me
 
so kind~so bad all at once
 
friend no heaven for you
 
Date Written:9/4/2021
 
2 Place
 
Kimo Form Old or New Poetry Contest
 
Sponsored by: Constance La France

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Date: 9/11/2021 10:03:00 AM
Snake in grass, so well observed, so well penned
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 9/12/2021 11:35:00 AM
Thank You, for your note. It is an honor to have a win. Glad you like this write. Yes, a snake in the grass. Have a blessed day..................
Date: 9/10/2021 3:06:00 PM
Another person born to be a politician. lol. ~ gw
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 9/11/2021 9:00:00 AM
Thank You, for your note. It is an honor to have a win. Glad you like this one. Oh No!!! No more politicians. We have way tooooo many. Have a blessed day/weekend...................
Date: 9/9/2021 5:58:00 AM
Sad when a person has that personality quirk. I am sure it is not easy to keep friends when that happens. Congrats on your win. Sara
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 9/9/2021 7:56:00 AM
Thank You, for your note and for your congratulation. It is an honor to have a win. Glad you like this sad one. It will kill a friendship. Have a blessed day...................
Date: 9/8/2021 9:10:00 PM
Paula, congratulations on your win in my Kimo Contest with your wonderful poem, well done ~ love and serenity _Constance
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 9/9/2021 7:55:00 AM
Thank You, for your note and for your congratulation. It is an honor to have a win. I enjoyed writing "Smile and Lie" for your contest. Glad you like this one. Have a blessed day...................
Date: 9/7/2021 3:17:00 PM
Congratulations!
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 9/9/2021 7:52:00 AM
Thank You, for your note and for your congratulation. It is an honor to have a win. Glad you like this write. Have a blessed day...................
Date: 9/7/2021 6:25:00 AM
Ain't that the truth my friend. There ain't gonna be no liars in Heaven. Some people smile and shake your hand with one hand while stabbing you in the back with the other. Give those people a wide berth. Good job here. God Bless, JB
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 9/7/2021 1:24:00 PM
Thanks for your note and for your congratulation. It is an honor to have a win. Glad you like this one. Yes, no liars in Heaven. Cannot wait to see it. You are so right, "Give those people a wide berth." Have a blessed day...................
Date: 9/7/2021 4:37:00 AM
Congrats! Thanks for sharing this reality. God bless you.
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 9/7/2021 1:22:00 PM
Thanks for your note and for your congratulation. It is an honor to have a win. Glad you like this Smile and Lie write. Have a blessed day...................
Date: 9/6/2021 8:11:00 AM
Strong emotion here!! Congrats on the win, Paula.
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 9/6/2021 8:19:00 AM
Thanks for your note and for your congratulation. It is an honor to have a win. Glad you like this one. Yes, strong emotion on this write. I do not understand why people will do this. Have a blessed day...................
Date: 9/5/2021 3:51:00 PM
can relate to this one big time Paula, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 9/6/2021 8:15:00 AM
Thanks for your note and for your congratulation. It is an honor to have a win. Glad you like this write. I do not understand why people are like this. Have a blessed day...................
Date: 9/5/2021 5:12:00 AM
Wow!
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 9/6/2021 8:13:00 AM
Thanks for your note. Glad you like this one. Have a blessed day...................
Date: 9/4/2021 1:59:00 PM
. Great imagery and choice of words. Thanks
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 9/6/2021 8:13:00 AM
Thanks for your note. Glad you like this "Smile and Lie" write. Have a blessed day...................

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