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Smells of Autumn

Autumn begins with one fact,
Sounded by first egg to crack.
   With eggs mixed In a batter, 
   The outcome won't matter
Because smoke is filling the shack.

autumnlimerick

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sara Etgen-Baker

July 29, 2025 at 4:10 PM

what cleverness...reading it makes me anticipate fall even more and, of course, the baking :-)

Zyrool Gifford

November 14, 2024 at 8:03 AM

Hello Hilda, loved your poem, made me laugh, visualising your words. Nicely done, my friend. Have a great day.

Hilda Greenhough

November 14, 2024 at 8:22 AM

Thank you Zyrool.

Kelly Deschler

September 15, 2024 at 11:05 AM

I always get the urge to do some baking once the fall season comes around, and there are certain aromas that I associate with this time of the year... I enjoyed your clever and unique take on the "smells of autumn"... Great creative work, Hilda :)

Hilda Greenhough

September 15, 2024 at 1:53 PM

Thank you. Attempting to bake and actually baking are two different things. I hope you have success. Thanks for your comment

Daniel Henry Rodgers

September 6, 2024 at 4:36 AM

Dear Hilda, You made me smile this morning, and I was expecting something totally different when I read the title. I was pleasantly pleased and chuckled. - Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel

Hilda Greenhough

September 6, 2024 at 10:16 AM

Thank you. Hectic autumn has lots of surprises.

Gershon Wolf

September 5, 2024 at 8:00 PM

Who's smoking in my shack?! ~ Shaquille O'Neill (aka 'Shaq').

Hilda Greenhough

September 5, 2024 at 8:21 PM

I learned a new fact. Thanks for commenting.

Ink Empress

September 4, 2024 at 1:50 AM

dear hilda this made me smile and I absolutely love the way youv written this limerick. Its so nice to always see you write on various subjects and also in various forms! You are truly a gifted soul. I especially love here “ With eggs mixed In a batter, The outcome won't matter” brilliant! Good one! Loved this! Hope you are doing well! Missed reading your work! Sending you light always kind soul

Hilda Greenhough

September 4, 2024 at 6:22 AM

Thank you. This limerick is a bit of laughter.

Karen Jones

September 3, 2024 at 9:27 PM

This is so cleverly written. Haha enjoyed

Hilda Greenhough

September 4, 2024 at 1:35 AM

Thank you for the compliment. Enjoy the season.

Susan Ashley

September 3, 2024 at 1:10 PM

Oh no! Dear Hilda, your humorous limerick is full of lively imagery. Indeed, fall and baking go together, but not the smoke in the shack, haha! Warmest wishes my poet friend.. ~Susan

Hilda Greenhough

September 3, 2024 at 1:32 PM

Thank you. I'm glad it made you laugh.

Valsa George

September 2, 2024 at 8:09 PM

This happens if we are not careful. Once when smoke filled the shack, that I remembered, I had kept something in the oven to bake. Quite humorous, Hilda.

Hilda Greenhough

September 3, 2024 at 6:08 AM

I'm glad you like it. Thank you for your thoughts.