Smell of Poo
Standing in queue
smell of poo, yuck!*
no loo in sight.
Hold place in line
will be fine, soon
not mine, for sure.
Embarrassment ~~
pungent scent, too
need mint to mask.
Return to queue
no more poo smell,
the do do done.
Written May 6, 2022
*This Than-Bauk is dedicated to Jan Allison, Queen of the Poop poem!
Copyright © L Milton Hankins | Year Posted 2022
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