Slum Hopes

The men didn’t sleep even after dark, 
clanging steel and creating sparks beneath moonlight
working away at the shackled houses
She stood in the room with her back to the empty window
looking at the little feet protruding from the blankets 
like little fireflies, steadily glowing because they did not know.
She guarded them. She listened and hoped 
the noises would not enter their dreams
on this last night they had.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Gi-Sa Avatar
November 20, 2017 at 1:02 PM
An interesting write!
A  Avatar
January 3, 2016 at 6:57 PM
Amazing
K. Avatar
July 10, 2010 at 12:19 AM
This is such a sad and haunting write Grace-- it actually comes across as very vivid to me...nikko :)
Goff Avatar
July 9, 2010 at 9:18 PM
good work, Grace...jmg
Spence Sr Avatar
July 7, 2010 at 10:56 AM
The light comes when we least expect it at times, and it's so marvelous when it shines. This image of such a glorious moment is so touching. Great job! Joseph
Brown Avatar
July 7, 2010 at 4:18 AM
I enjoyed reading your poetry today Grace. I wish you the best always. Love, Carol
Kendrick Avatar
July 6, 2010 at 4:54 PM
Sad tear jerker...Good luck in the contest with excellent write that is a reminder to be thankful for life and gifts from above..Sara
Guzzi Avatar
July 6, 2010 at 3:29 PM
No no..can not enter a contest with I DON"T KNOW as a form....it's FREE VERSE HUGS! please change dear....
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