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Slowly

Slowly 

 ever so slowly

 overcome with emotion

building up ever so effortlessly

   inside

passions burning ever so swiftly

reside

deep in my heart

sweet smells of your luscious gateau 

roam free

a slight breeze blows in your hazel hair

enhancing your essence

enticing me

slowly

  ever so slowly

I wrap my arms around your 

aphrodite-esque waist

squeezing ever so slightly

 whispering

"love me"

Copyright © Tim Smith | Year Posted 2017

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Connie Marcum Wong Date: 4/10/2017 4:21:00 AM I love this romantic poem Tim. Bravo! 7 ; ) Login to Reply

Carole Duet Date: 4/6/2017 10:37:00 PM And, who wouldn't love you...and your enticing poem? So romantic...love it. Also, congrats on making the "Best Poems" list. Login to Reply

Street Cries Date: 3/31/2017 4:05:00 PM Strong ink Login to Reply

John Hamilton Date: 3/23/2017 8:18:00 AM Ditto to what everyone else said. I know unoriginal but you keep producing high quality romantic poems, we run out of superlatives. a7 Login to Reply

Rita Solis Radius Date: 3/23/2017 8:13:00 AM Lovely, Beautiful, and Lovely!!! Rita. ^^ Login to Reply

Arthur Vaso Date: 3/13/2017 5:53:00 PM No words, simply beautiful. Login to Reply

Sara Ella Date: 3/12/2017 4:45:00 PM A very lovely poem Tim <3 Full of love and so romantic <3 Login to Reply

Charmaine Chircop Date: 3/11/2017 11:16:00 AM One of your best I have to admit..aphrodite-esque waist : )..Love that.What can I say? Extremely sweet..and I can feel a longing for love..: )A fave. Login to Reply

Lynn Marie Date: 3/11/2017 10:47:00 AM You are a master craftsman Tim! This is breathtaking and your word choice...spectacular! A beautiful poem, so lovely to read.:-) A fave, 7++++! many blessings to you :-) lynn Login to Reply

Darren White Date: 3/11/2017 10:41:00 AM Ohhhh TIM, luscious gateau, how more sensual do you want it... aphrodite-esque waist. How many yum things can you pack in one poem? Fave back atcha! Login to Reply

Jan Allison Date: 3/11/2017 9:57:00 AM ooh what a beauty of a romantic poem Tim:-) hugs jan xxx Login to Reply

Heidi Sands Date: 3/11/2017 9:02:00 AM Wow Tim, this is beautiful, so well written!. A favorite :) Login to Reply

Lisa Ricci Date: 3/11/2017 8:22:00 AM Yeah. Hello Tim. I think I have the honor to respond first to your entry. This is a beauty in its entirety. And yes A Must Read Out Loud Entry. Excellent poetry expression and execution. Honestly Login to Reply