Slowly

Slowly ever so slowly overcome with emotion building up ever so effortlessly inside passions burning ever so swiftly reside deep in my heart sweet smells of your luscious gateau roam free a slight breeze blows in your hazel hair enhancing your essence enticing me slowly ever so slowly I wrap my arms around your aphrodite-esque waist squeezing ever so slightly whispering "love me"

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Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 4/10/2017 4:21:00 AM

I love this romantic poem Tim. Bravo! 7 ; )

Carole Duet

Date: 4/6/2017 10:37:00 PM

And, who wouldn't love you...and your enticing poem? So romantic...love it. Also, congrats on making the "Best Poems" list.

Street Cries

Date: 3/31/2017 4:05:00 PM

Strong ink

John Hamilton

Date: 3/23/2017 8:18:00 AM

Ditto to what everyone else said. I know unoriginal but you keep producing high quality romantic poems, we run out of superlatives. a7

Rita Solis Radius

Date: 3/23/2017 8:13:00 AM

Lovely, Beautiful, and Lovely!!! Rita. ^^

Arthur Vaso

Date: 3/13/2017 5:53:00 PM

No words, simply beautiful.

Sara Ella

Date: 3/12/2017 4:45:00 PM

A very lovely poem Tim <3 Full of love and so romantic <3

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 3/11/2017 11:16:00 AM

One of your best I have to admit..aphrodite-esque waist : )..Love that.What can I say? Extremely sweet..and I can feel a longing for love..: )A fave.

Lynn Marie

Date: 3/11/2017 10:47:00 AM

You are a master craftsman Tim! This is breathtaking and your word choice...spectacular! A beautiful poem, so lovely to read.:-) A fave, 7++++! many blessings to you :-) lynn

Darren White

Date: 3/11/2017 10:41:00 AM

Ohhhh TIM, luscious gateau, how more sensual do you want it... aphrodite-esque waist. How many yum things can you pack in one poem? Fave back atcha!

Jan Allison

Date: 3/11/2017 9:57:00 AM

ooh what a beauty of a romantic poem Tim:-) hugs jan xxx

Heidi Sands

Date: 3/11/2017 9:02:00 AM

Wow Tim, this is beautiful, so well written!. A favorite :)

Lisa Ricci

Date: 3/11/2017 8:22:00 AM

Yeah. Hello Tim. I think I have the honor to respond first to your entry. This is a beauty in its entirety. And yes A Must Read Out Loud Entry. Excellent poetry expression and execution. Honestly