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Slow Wings

Within my true macadam tethered reins roll— A ragged seam play On cords unmade. This bag of feathers My pins, rehashed held the dreaminess In its youth's mask. Pinions dark within Move through my own breathlessness; A jab dug in my pillow— Its cloth frisked. Vigil my heart out of time That her coma at last allows sleep— A new probing dream lifted by wings. My pale dark in analysis Glows while in the light. But like a butterfly's effects in my skin— Our cocoon's riddled strife. The fiber of these slow wings— falls first at the thread's melting.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023




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Date: 8/30/2023 10:46:00 AM
Wonderful, creative, fresh imagery, Paige. You have a wonderful ability to create impactful images and memorable phrases - "our cocoon's riddled strife." Thank you for sharing this gem. Blessings!
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Date: 8/22/2023 3:30:00 PM
I found great delight in perusing your poetic creation, Paige. It captivated me with its enchanting perspective on the enduring process of inner healing and emphasized the profound significance of unwavering determination.
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Date: 8/19/2023 8:39:00 PM
Its the slow and meanful ones that matter the most. The simple lifts they give in unexpected moments.... with reverance A.S.
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Date: 8/17/2023 8:51:00 PM
Intriguing take on the patience to heal, and the importance of persistence (I might be off but that is my take) but beautiful imagery and metaphors~
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Date: 8/17/2023 6:18:00 PM
Imaginations imagery fasinating.
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Date: 8/17/2023 5:35:00 AM
Great metaphors of wings and flying ! Well composed dear Paige.
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Date: 8/16/2023 7:25:00 PM
an artful poem, made me think of some dreams we have, like flying , enjoyed
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Date: 8/16/2023 5:51:00 PM
Impressive use of vivid imagery, Page. Your composition displays a commendable level of craftsmanship, my friend. This introspective poem prompts us to reflect on the importance of gratitude for our current blessings.
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