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Walking past each other and just by chance My heart skips a beat and my knees turn weak Your eyes lock with mine in a fleeting glance In a ricochet of emotion I just cannot speak Our time cut short on that exotic island resort Mutual attraction that grew, our emotions weren’t slow But alas contact lost aft’ that last kiss at the port Intimacy so fleeting - regrets of letting you go We were star crossed lovers on that fateful day I remember that last time when you held me so tight Now per chance we meet thousands of miles away ‘Neath the same blanket of stars and a moon like tonight ~ ~ * “As the midnight moon, was driftin’ through ~ The lazy sway of the trees ~ I saw the look in your eyes, lookin' into mine ~ I’m seeing what you wanted to see Darlin' don't say a word, cause I already heard ~ What your body's sayin' to mine You’re tired of fast moves ~ You’ve got a slow groove ~ On your mind” Swirling sparkling shades of colours that mix and smudge It’s been so long but there’s no cause to rush Run you lips on my neck feel our naked skins touch Nipples a tingling and a warm spreading flush Your soft slow hand feels like flitting fireflies You whisper my name, I’m enchanted tonight Soft moans of pleasure and my passionate sighs Play with me, sway with me and feel my delight ~ ~ * “You want a man with a slow hand ~ You want a lover with a easy touch You want somebody who will spend some time ~ Not come and go with a heated rush Baby believe me I’ll understand ~ When it comes to love, you want a slow hand” My nerves aglow like the tips of optic fibres Your touches trigger firework displays to ignite Seeking and teasing my spot of torrid desires Impatiently craving our eminent fusion tonight Opening like a flower dripping with a dewy spritz Ecstasy overflows with your slow hand in motion Electrostatic sparks on my tongue, skin and lips Sip my summer wine that’s the nectar of my passion ~ ~ * “Darlin', don't say a word, 'cause I already heard ~ What your body's sayin' to mine If you want it all night ~ You know it's alright ~ I’ve got the time” I tantalise your tumescent core with silken caresses Erotically teasing you with tiny feather like tickles Like the soft waving flutter of butterflies winged kisses Thrilling sensory overload of silver waves and ripples All else out of focus on a soft cloud of passion Exquisite pleasure on the crest of a fire No words that are needed or any explanation The endless waves of emotion that transpire ~ ~ * “You got a man with a slow hand ~ You got a lover with an easy touch You got somebody who will spend some time ~ Not come and go in a heated rush Baby believe me I’ll understand ~ When it comes to love, you want a slow hand” My hips arching high meeting your ardent thirst Fill my ocean - savour my delight Rhapsody of fluttering sensations - a volcanic burst Come with me - the world’s ours tonight Basking in the enchantment of an afterglow An amorous haze of amber swirls and coral sand With crystal clear waters and sparkling sand below At long last I’ve found you in this island fairyland Acknowledgement: My appreciation to RP (the Reluctant Poet) for his creative input on a delicate sensual theme that we’ve all experienced sometime. POTD 16 Aug 2017 * Lyric 'Slow Hand' Music and Video Clip Citation and Reference: Video Clip and Lyrics 'Slow Hand' by Phantasm 2000AD Published on Nov 2, 2008 Elvis Returns Standard You Tube licence. All rights of the Lyrics, video and track belong to the original Copyright owners. The original Lyrics written by J. Warren Bettis, first released sung and released in May 1981 by the Pointer Sisters and subsequently sung by various artists including Elvis in the above clip. Lyrics of the song in quotes and italics and referenced with and asterisk has been transcribed as a read to be followed with the song. It is not intended to be or claimed as part of the above poetry verses.

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Date: 3/31/2018 9:54:00 AM
The words seductive and steamy come to mind... PHEW! Talk later, going immediately for an ice cold shower!!! PHEW!!! Love, Happy Jack XOX
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Date: 11/5/2017 2:22:00 PM
Sway with me, feel my delight. Nice write Maria
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Date: 11/6/2017 12:11:00 AM
Lol! thank you Edward. So glad you could sway with it. I always appreciate your visits and nice comments...Maria
Date: 10/10/2017 8:24:00 AM
Wow. It's a nice loving piece, expresses sweet moment shared. Keep it up.
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Date: 10/12/2017 12:59:00 AM
Thanks so much Derek, both for the visit and lovely comments...Maria
Date: 9/3/2017 7:26:00 AM
Seductive and sensual write Maria. A beautiful expression of emotions and desire.
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Date: 10/12/2017 12:59:00 AM
Thanks so much James, always appreciate your friendly visit and lovely comments....Maria
Date: 9/2/2017 4:03:00 PM
Sweet, very nice so well done, sparkling delights.
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Date: 10/12/2017 1:03:00 AM
Thanks so much Edward both for the visit and lovely comments....Maria
Date: 8/23/2017 4:21:00 PM
Some kinda of erotic fireworks this poem blasts, Maria ... w/props to RP. A sizzling POTD congrats to you as well. Love and joy always.
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Date: 8/23/2017 10:47:00 PM
Haha, glad you liked the fireworks my friend Freddie. Thanks so much for your lovely visit and comments, always appreciate them...Maria
Date: 8/22/2017 1:34:00 AM
Wow! Incredibly delicious, Maria! lol Loved it. Absolutely perfect and so is the music. I love Elvis. I used to live across the street from him in Memphis. I bet he would love this poem too. It's just so...exciting! And congrats on POTD too.
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Date: 8/22/2017 5:47:00 AM
Thank you so much Carole for all the wonderful support you have showed me. My goodness how exciting would that have been living so close to the King-Wow!!So glad that you liked this, my imagination ran away a bit, I think lol
Date: 8/20/2017 4:32:00 AM
Hi Maria , have to open the windows it is getting hot in here great write my friend ;;;)))) hugs
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Date: 8/20/2017 9:31:00 PM
Or a cold shower might be better? Thanks for the visit Niall, I do appreciate it....Maria
Date: 8/19/2017 7:38:00 AM
It is good to see that true passion and romance can inspire such beautiful poetry, Maria. I too took my time to read these lines, savouring the contents at my own pace. Full marks to you and congrats (albeit belated) on the p.o.t.d. award. Warm regards // paul
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Date: 8/20/2017 9:37:00 PM
Thank you so much Paul. You know you are one of my favorite poets on this site, your incredible input and wonderful comments are something I have always looked out for and deeply appreciated. I will miss you ....Maria
Date: 8/18/2017 11:41:00 PM
Wow Maria! This poem could nestle nicely in one of those romantic novels! Big kudos on receiving POTD! Elvis's lyrics fit beautifully with your wonderfully written poem! : )
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Date: 8/20/2017 9:35:00 PM
Thanks so much Connie, I really appreciate your lovely comments and visits as always. Yes I'll have to think seriously about those novels, thanks for the vote of confidence......Maria
Date: 8/18/2017 11:10:00 AM
This is absolutely enchanting and what a marvelous creation you've made here, dear friend. It gives a sweet taste of optimism and well being. Well done. Congrats for POTD. Regs Sunita
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Date: 8/20/2017 9:32:00 PM
Thanks so much Sunita, I always appreciate your visit and comments my friend......Maria
Date: 8/17/2017 6:56:00 AM
Maria, Congratulations on POTD!! What an extraordinary write -- both captivating and enchanting. Best Always, Gary
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Date: 8/17/2017 7:19:00 AM
Thank you so much Gary, I really appreciate your visit and wonderful comments ....Maria
Date: 8/16/2017 8:08:00 PM
Ohh Maria! Hot steamy romantic spicey stuff here! A beautifully written sensual poem well deserving of POTD honors! Congratulations!! :)
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Date: 8/17/2017 7:21:00 AM
Thank you so much Susan. I really appreciate your visit and generous comments. So glad that you enjoyed this 'steamy write'....Maria
Date: 8/16/2017 6:34:00 PM
Congrats!!!...(((POTD)))...another spectacular write Maria...keep them coming, my friend...god bless...^WW^
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Date: 8/17/2017 7:24:00 AM
Thank you so much WW, I really appreciate your visits and generous comments as always my friend....Maria
Date: 8/16/2017 5:59:00 PM
Nicely done romantic poem and rhyme, Maria,congratulations on POTD
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Date: 8/17/2017 7:27:00 AM
Thank you so much Eve, both for your visit and generous comments, so glad that you liked it....Maria
Date: 8/16/2017 10:17:00 AM
Without any doubt I say this is a shining gem of romantic thoughts and lyrical verse. Definitely a fine and most deserving choice for POTD honors my friend.. Solid ten and now a gem that I fav..
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Date: 8/17/2017 7:29:00 AM
Robert you always bestow such praise and beautiful comments my friend, coming from such a wonderful poet like yourself I am deeply honoured. Thank you....Maria
Date: 8/16/2017 9:34:00 AM
So much talent went into this. Congratulations!
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Date: 8/17/2017 7:31:00 AM
Thank you so much Sunlite, both for your visit and generous comments, so glad that you liked it....Maria
Date: 8/16/2017 8:38:00 AM
Maria you blended thr lyric perfectly into your work, congratulations...
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Date: 8/17/2017 7:36:00 AM
Thank you so much Charlie, I really appreciate both you visit and generous comments....Maria
Date: 8/16/2017 8:35:00 AM
Hi Maria, a wonderfully sensual write from your pen. I love just being able to let such words sing i to my mind, what pictures your words do paint on the canvas of my mind. A belated congratulations on POTD Maria. An excellent write. Has to be a fave. Hugs....Mike. XX
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Date: 8/17/2017 7:38:00 AM
Thank you so much Mike,so glad that you liked this. I really appreciate both your visit and generous comments my friend...Maria xxx
Date: 8/16/2017 6:53:00 AM
Beautiful sensual write Maria...Congrats on POTD
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Date: 8/16/2017 6:57:00 AM
Thank you so much Joseph, both for the visit and congrats, I really appreciate it...Maria
Date: 8/16/2017 6:27:00 AM
Congratulations my dearest friend Maria on your POTD!!! Over the moon this morning reading it again :) big hugs :)
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Date: 8/16/2017 6:51:00 AM
Thank you so much my dearest friend Akkina, Wow! I was pretty surprised getting POTD on this, but great for Elvis, the King lives again, thank you for coming back with the congrats, I appreciate it...Maria xx
Date: 8/16/2017 6:04:00 AM
Sensual poem, about desire for the beloved.. Goes nicely with the music..
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Date: 8/16/2017 6:56:00 AM
The desire was all for Elvis, and he inspired the poem, so great, the King lives again. Funny I never used to like him, but I do now, especially with this song, Thanks Si, both for the visit and comment, do appreciate it....Maria
Date: 8/16/2017 3:23:00 AM
- Maria, a really beautiful, warm and romantic poem ... wooow - (Thumbs up for Elvis :) - Congratulations with your p.o.t.d., ... well deserved ... and even more :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/16/2017 3:32:00 AM
- No, he's dead ... I do not think he's alive ... it's the media that wants attention, Maria - hugs
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Date: 8/16/2017 3:28:00 AM
Thank you so much Anne-Lise, I thought my computer was playing tricks here, one minute it was showing the previous one then mine So thank you, you confirmed it. Elvis lives on Yay!! Thanks once again for the support and love my friend...Maria xxx
Date: 8/14/2017 11:37:00 AM
Oh my, Maria! Blushing! This is gorgeous. So full of imagery (blushing) and passion. A Favorite for me. (Don't tell anyone). -- Dean
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Date: 8/14/2017 11:05:00 PM
Don't worry Dean, your secret is safe with me ;) You've got me blushing with your praise too. I really appreciate your comment and I know it would have taken a deal of courage especially for a guy to do that . Thanks for making it a Favorite also...Maria
Date: 8/14/2017 8:48:00 AM
I am afloat on cloud nine right now. So so romantic I just wanna keep reading. Heading to the beach now and I know for sure I'll be floating in the water and read it again :) absolutely beautiful and most romantic EVER :) :) I love it! Hugs :)
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Date: 8/14/2017 11:09:00 PM
Hi Akkina, so glad this left you floating on Cloud 9. Elvis singing this song to me put me on Cloud 15.lol. Thank you my dear friend both for the visit and wonderful support that you show. I really appreciate it. ...Maria xxx
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