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Slips and Trips

It was freezing so, and cold winds did blow
 As I walked slowly through the fallen snow
 But I slipped on some ice
 My keister paid the price
 Tried getting up, but down again I'd go

 12-29-2020
Winter Snow Or Ice Limerick Contest 
 Sponsor: Tania Kitchin

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Andrea Dietrich

January 10, 2021 at 12:03 PM

Back with my congratulations, Joseph!

Jan Allison

January 8, 2021 at 3:30 PM

love the limerick and the pic, many congrats Joseph:-) hugs jan xx

Sara Kendrick

January 8, 2021 at 1:50 PM

Your work is a winner way to go..Congrats. Sara

Jo Chamberlain

January 8, 2021 at 11:31 AM

Ouch sounds like a painful walk! Congratulations on your winning placement.

Mark Koplin

January 8, 2021 at 7:20 AM

Back with Congrats!

Linda Alice Fowler

January 8, 2021 at 5:44 AM

Great one Joseph. :)) Congratulations on the win! Linda

Tania Kitchin

January 8, 2021 at 4:03 AM

Joe, congratulations on your winning placement with your funny limerick, I could see myself doing this!

Mark Koplin

January 1, 2021 at 11:27 AM

That's good, I love the picture too. Great Great job Joseph!! Thanks for the laugh

Constance La France

January 1, 2021 at 4:47 AM

Joseph, lol, great limerick for the contest, oh yes, this happens in my frozen city all the time, there is no avoiding it _Constance

Andrea Dietrich

December 31, 2020 at 5:47 PM

haha, I just about wrote one like this. I remember a tall boy from church who fell on ice in front of me many years ago. I later heard he had a crush on me, so now I know why his face got super red when he fell like that. poor guy. I think by now he is must be nearly 70. I heard he married a wonderful woman back in iowa!

Brandy Nicole

December 29, 2020 at 8:44 PM

Ouch !! Watch out for ice !! Yes, you will fall. This made me smile. :) The picture you have chosen, matches your words perfectly. This is cute, clever and so creative. :) Brandy