Slim

SLIM

          An internal dialogue by the old stork Slim

My back hurts today, and my wings are not what they used to be.
I could call in sick, but then who would deliver the new Johnson baby?
I've got to think about giving this up, but boy, would I miss it. …
and the young storks don't seem to want this job..not much danger or
excitement in it……….I'll bet in a few years all our business will
go to  FED-EX or UPS….doesn't seem right….won't be much magic
in that…. lets see,  I've got Johnson Boy in the morning..and maybe 
Gorelick twins this afternoon.  Here he is now..hair as red as fire..
isnt he a bruiser though….what? 9#, 10oz?….I'd better grab a Tylenol
first thing or I'll never make it..saw the little girls, tiny things but
boy are they sweet. Going to be a busy family for sure..
…….
Well that was a day..great fun…not like yesterday when I had to leave
that baby on the doorstep cause nobody answered the door..Worried 
and waited, glad someone finally came..seemed like a nice woman
but a bit overwhelmed…..think I made several stops here before…

………Geez--- enough for one day..I've got the best job in the world..
The best job I ever loved….." Hi Dear, what's for dinner?…….Frogs?..
my favorite…..


Based on the old folk story that told of storks delivering babies.  Something to 
tell little children who wonder where babies come from…
Most countries have their own version of this story…

For Carol's Animal Contest..
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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July 29, 2014 at 12:59 PM
Barbara, a XOOL poem, Congratulations, on your awesome win.... Love Linda
Hamilton Avatar
July 27, 2014 at 1:55 PM
lovely tale Barbara congrats on win hugs
Nance Avatar
July 27, 2014 at 12:01 PM
Aww that is creative, loved the story, grats on your win!!
Devonshire Avatar
July 27, 2014 at 11:00 AM
Congratulations, BG! Just 9 pounds, 10 ounces? Hey, my Mom said I was 11 + pounds. LOL Perhaps she was exaggerating, but pity the poor stork. Love your poem, Carolyn
Smith Avatar
July 27, 2014 at 8:12 AM
This is wonderful BG...congrats on the win...hugs
A. Sharma Avatar
July 27, 2014 at 6:57 AM
Wonderful write Barbara! Congrats on top win!
Chutani Avatar
July 27, 2014 at 2:06 AM
very good tale, BG. and congrats for top win. Mohan
Smith Avatar
July 26, 2014 at 8:28 PM
Congrats, dear Barbara!.. This stork brought you a great win! Hugs.. Arlene
Gorelick Avatar
July 26, 2014 at 9:03 PM
Thank you Arlene..it was kind of silly but fun...
Mehta Avatar
July 26, 2014 at 8:28 PM
Congrats on your amazing win, Barbara
Gorelick Avatar
July 26, 2014 at 9:04 PM
thank you Dr...glad to hear from you...
Kendrick Avatar
July 25, 2014 at 6:00 PM
Ahh!! Reads like a winner..I bet that stork does have cervical spinal pain at the end of a day and a sore beak..Way to go ..Sara
Anish Avatar
July 20, 2014 at 8:11 PM
Enjoyable verse here. Keep 'em coming! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
Gibson Avatar
July 20, 2014 at 5:36 PM
So sweet, cute and entertaining. Great entry for the contest.
Allison Avatar
July 20, 2014 at 2:47 PM
wonderful take on the animals theme Barbara. Good luck in the contest. Hugs Jan xx
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