Sleighride

The frightful winter storm is o'er, now all is so serene.
Mellow moonbeams now flood the wondrous wintry scene!

The gaily-festooned sleigh glides silently o'er the pristine snow,
Laden with festive revelers, their ruddy faces all aglow!

The two svelte steeds trot rhythmically o'er snowy hill and dell.
Sweet melodic tunes chime merrily from each tiny harness bell!

Mom keeps hot cider flowing to fill each empty mug.
Recalling days of yore, Dad slyly steals a kiss and hug!

The kids urge Dad to make the horses go a little faster.
"No" says he, "With drifts ahead we'd surely court disaster!"

Candlight welcomes them to Grandma's house just beyond the bend!
Boundless love and a roaring fire await them, on that they can depend!

Robert L. Hinshaw, CMSgt, USAF, Retired
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Placed No. 8 in Francine Roberts' "A Winter Couplet" Contest - November 2011
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Brown Avatar
November 30, 2011 at 11:02 AM
Congratulations on your win in Francine's "A Winter Couplet" contest Bob. Love, Carol
Johnson Avatar
November 29, 2011 at 3:53 PM
Good one Bob , its just the job, to make them sleigh bells ring, great writing from you Bob, johnson says yes indeed...
Pettit Avatar
November 29, 2011 at 11:46 AM
I can just hear Steve Lawrence and Eydie Gorme singing as I read your well-written couplet. Congrats to you in Francine's contest.
Roberts Avatar
November 29, 2011 at 12:02 AM
congrats on your 8th place win in the contest Bob with this beautiful holiday piece
Dietrich Avatar
November 27, 2011 at 3:48 PM
This is wonderfully nostalgic, Bob.Glad I finally saw this one.
Song Avatar
November 21, 2011 at 5:28 AM
Nostalgic winter's eve. Love the senses that you've touched upon-especially loved gma's cider and the fireplace warmth. Best of luck in the couplet challenge. I bet it'll be a competitive contest. I had started a hockey write and will see if it'll transform into a real shiner! lol Have a great one, Bob. Gwendolen...ps..folks just don't like political stuff on this site I've noticed. Very bizarre bc the poetic form itself is worth commenting on...
Peranteau Avatar
November 11, 2011 at 7:26 PM
You've surely sparked desire for winter here sir ! Though I'll miss the flower's buds ! Awesome write dear poet ! Have a wonderful weekend....much love, james
Breidenthal Avatar
November 11, 2011 at 12:31 AM
What a wonderfully made poem! Grat luck for the next wintry poems! :D (DW Breidenthal)
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November 11, 2011 at 12:31 AM
Great* Have a GREAT winter!
Wesley Avatar
November 10, 2011 at 4:11 PM
My father used to bring the horse and sleigh, thanks for the memory Bob, PS What happened to the horses while they were at Grandma's?
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November 10, 2011 at 10:52 AM
A delightful depictiion of the "ride to grandma's house" over snow-covered roads. Wish we could go back to these days, Bob. Written with wit, charm and nostalgia! Best wishes in Francine's contest! Love, Carolyn
Lane Avatar
November 10, 2011 at 10:34 AM
I can hear the sleigh bells. Tony
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