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Dream Melting In Trance

The night you left with our love's wilted flower the gloomy sky was falling down in gentle shower. In the soft streetlight I saw your sodden silhouette slowly disappear in the wet haze, I couldn’t forget. The scene sank deep in the maze of my memory, for years weaved the tapestry of our untold story, I thought someday I’d spread it on my poem new, the only one I’d dedicate to our times and to you. Memory has a strange habit of making dream, in deep sleep they appear, unreal they don’t seem. One night my eyes on edge of sleep saw you return the way you departed, made my mute heart churn. I opened the door, went out to let you in again. The night was dark, drenched by the pouring rain. I stood alone hit by the splash of cold water spray, eyes sleepless, I saw sleepwalking dream melt away.
(In order to meet the rhyming scheme the poem exceeds by one line over the stipulated 15 lines which I could not help for the sake of the form) Posted : July 16, 2018 Contest : Sleepless Old Or New Sponsor : Carolyn Devonshire

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Date: 6/16/2020 2:01:00 PM
very well penned submimal many congrats :-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 6/16/2020 1:51:00 PM
I like your poem, Subimal, but there were some grammar problems. Otherwise, it would have placed higher. Congrats on your placement in the contest, Carolyn
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Date: 8/1/2018 7:10:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. Thought-provoking.
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 8/2/2018 2:21:00 AM
Thank you, Susan.
Date: 7/31/2018 9:48:00 PM
Congrats to win on your excellent poem. Warm Wishes.
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 8/1/2018 12:53:00 AM
Thank you.
Date: 7/31/2018 9:37:00 AM
Well done Subimal, congrats on a nice win!
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 8/1/2018 12:52:00 AM
Thank you, John.
Date: 7/16/2018 10:53:00 PM
Subimal, nice work!!
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 7/16/2018 11:39:00 PM
Thank you for you visit, Lyric.
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 7/16/2018 11:39:00 PM
Thank you for you visit, Lyric.

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