Dream Melting In Trance

The night you left with our love's wilted flower the gloomy sky was falling down in gentle shower. In the soft streetlight I saw your sodden silhouette slowly disappear in the wet haze, I couldn’t forget. The scene sank deep in the maze of my memory, for years weaved the tapestry of our untold story, I thought someday I’d spread it on my poem new, the only one I’d dedicate to our times and to you. Memory has a strange habit of making dream, in deep sleep they appear, unreal they don’t seem. One night my eyes on edge of sleep saw you return the way you departed, made my mute heart churn. I opened the door, went out to let you in again. The night was dark, drenched by the pouring rain. I stood alone hit by the splash of cold water spray, eyes sleepless, I saw sleepwalking dream melt away.
(In order to meet the rhyming scheme the poem exceeds by one line over the stipulated 15 lines which I could not help for the sake of the form) Posted : July 16, 2018 Contest : Sleepless Old Or New Sponsor : Carolyn Devonshire
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Allison Avatar
June 16, 2020 at 2:01 PM
very well penned submimal many congrats :-) hugs jan xx
Devonshire Avatar
June 16, 2020 at 1:51 PM
I like your poem, Subimal, but there were some grammar problems. Otherwise, it would have placed higher. Congrats on your placement in the contest, Carolyn
Gentry Avatar
August 1, 2018 at 7:10 PM
Congratulations on your win. Thought-provoking.
Sinha-Roy Avatar
August 2, 2018 at 2:21 AM
Thank you, Susan.
Dutta Avatar
July 31, 2018 at 9:48 PM
Congrats to win on your excellent poem. Warm Wishes.
Sinha-Roy Avatar
August 1, 2018 at 12:53 AM
Thank you.
Hamilton Avatar
July 31, 2018 at 9:37 AM
Well done Subimal, congrats on a nice win!
Sinha-Roy Avatar
August 1, 2018 at 12:52 AM
Thank you, John.
Man Avatar
July 16, 2018 at 10:53 PM
Subimal, nice work!!
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July 16, 2018 at 11:39 PM
Thank you for you visit, Lyric.
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July 16, 2018 at 11:39 PM
Thank you for you visit, Lyric.
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