Sleeplessness of a Matured Vessel

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~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Old age once seemed like some distant destination on some horizon uncharted. Yet, just as one step in front of the other will take you thousands of miles if you keep walking, my old age arrived and caught me quite unaware. bones grating together, muscles achingly overworked, bladder slightly overactive, eyelids heavy and blinking, yet never able to find restful peace

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Silent One

Date: 1/16/2024 12:35:00 PM

Many will relate to your words my sweet friend... some age with grace, but some seem to want to be plastic.. most dont care ...

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 1/16/2024 5:40:00 PM

awww, thank you, Silent One. I do hope some will relate to my poem. I've never been one to be 'plastic' in anything I do. I'd like to age graciously like my grandmother did. She was sweet and uplifting up till the end. Died peacefully in her sleep like she wanted at the age of 100. I should be so lucky. I appreciate your consistent visits and support. Enjoy the remainder of your week, Sara

Vijay Pandit

Date: 1/16/2024 6:18:00 AM

Aging is never easy. A potent write, true to life, Sara. Many can relate.

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 1/16/2024 5:39:00 PM

thanks for your visit; I agree, aging isn't easy but it's a reality. Have a pleasant evening, Sara

Paul Willason

Date: 1/16/2024 1:46:00 AM

The wear and tear of age slows down the body, but joyfully the soul can sing undiminished. Keep the songs coming...

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 1/16/2024 4:34:00 AM

wise words, Paul. I appreciate your visit. Thanks for encouraging me to keep the songs coming...that was kind. Have a pleasant day, Sara

Tom Cunningham

Date: 1/16/2024 12:07:00 AM

It catches up with us all Sara, I remember my brother saying to me when he hit forty, bits start dropping off I laughed at him then but I'm not laughing now lol. One positive though, we gain wisdom and a lifetime of memories. Tom

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 1/16/2024 4:36:00 AM

thanks for visiting and for sharing your thoughts about your brother. Good insights. I agree with your positives--aging brings a wisdom and a certain calmness. I relish those...have a splendid day, Sara

Paige Hind

Date: 1/15/2024 5:54:00 PM

All the best for you- more graceful years, I hope <3

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 1/16/2024 4:35:00 AM

thanks, sweet Paige! Thus far, the days are graceful...Wishing your the best, hugs, Sara