Sleepless Nights

What if awake, asleep, does it really matter?
The walls ache, the pipes creak.
A tinny sound, hollow and empty 
as my womb, all the plumpness gone.
Shriveled petal dreaming of past blooms.

Weeping in sleep for remembered kisses
from a child grown who no longer misses me.
Electronic screens proceed with two dimensional images
playing at the brain pan of three,
mining the fertile memories of black and white.

Awake, asleep what does it matter?
Carpets cushion foot falls, dust dances
in stray beams of sunlight, circuits hum.
If life is not soon inserted into this scenario
Death will wed Mrs.  Haversham.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Brown Avatar
March 15, 2011 at 10:35 AM
Been there done that as they say. Debbie you laid~er~all out here. Sad but an outstanding write. Love, Carol
Sweetheart Avatar
March 15, 2011 at 5:59 AM
A very touching and sensitive write Debbie.. all Moms feel this way when children grow and move away.. the lost luvs and dreams and hopes dashed but u never know whats around the corner luv.. definitely an emotional piece touching the core and heart of tenderness..luv..
Dietrich Avatar
March 14, 2011 at 8:11 PM
I really like this, Debs. It is a wee bit like my Saturday REfelction I posted recently. Nice to catch this here today, and Who is Mrs. Haversham? (oh, I see someone below told who she was, well, I never would have remembered that in a million years!)
Guzzi Avatar
March 14, 2011 at 5:33 PM
yup Barb SAD not sure where I "went" funny? hmmm maybe just a tension release for Carolyn? [not 1 funny thing about it for me]
Gorelick Avatar
March 14, 2011 at 5:30 PM
I really love this..love the reference to Mrs. Haversham..made me sad..why do they have to grow up? sigh. BG
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March 14, 2011 at 5:13 PM
Debbie, I love the way that you have assimilated you and Mrs. Haversham in this awesome Free verse ! Do tell dear poet ! much love, james
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March 14, 2011 at 3:27 PM
Oh, I remember old Mrs. Haversham from Dickens' Great Expectations. It was sad the way she tried to keep memories of the wedding day alive, but you injected some interesting images and some humor into your poem, Deb. Nice work! Love, Carolyn
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