Sleeping

I’m told I crawled before I stood,
but I really don’t remember.  Early
on I flopped a lot, before a steady
gate.  I believe it was a September?
Or maybe in a November?  
September? November? ~ I really
don’t remember.  While I do remember
never able to dream.  To this day
not a night of gleam.  Doctors claim
a screwy REM, spiritualists also
say I do but forget – I say, a curiosity,
while nothing I deeply fret.  But with
so much of my life asleep,  I wonder
why such a mysterious deep?  Yet
guardian angels I guess,  watching over 
me – would be nice if one made a peep.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Croft Avatar
July 7, 2026 at 4:35 AM
good read for the morning!
DiMino Avatar
July 7, 2026 at 7:41 AM
Thank you,Karen; have a great day! Blessings.
George Avatar
July 6, 2026 at 9:18 PM
Very forgetful....!! You should at least remember your birthday! Enjoyed the tone of hilarity in your poem, dear Joe.
DiMino Avatar
July 7, 2026 at 1:09 AM
Hi Valsa; a silly write all for a laugh. Have a great day my friend!
M  Avatar
July 6, 2026 at 5:47 PM
Fun write Joe….those guardian angels never say a word!! Debx
DiMino Avatar
July 7, 2026 at 1:13 AM
Hopefully not "Oops! My bad." Thank you, Deb.
Faure Avatar
July 6, 2026 at 11:27 AM
Enjoyed very much!
DiMino Avatar
July 6, 2026 at 11:32 AM
Thank you, Joyce; poem was getting lonely without a comment. Have a great writing day my friend.
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