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Sleep - An Andaree

Slip this mortal coil and with the angels ride All this day’s troubles now put aside Untold secrets you may keep Drift with slumber deep No more tears Sleep Forget fears Now God’s blessing reap The unknown road may be steep With sweetest dreams let your heart abide Slip this mortal coil and with the angels ride

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Skat A

Date: 10/21/2015 9:28:00 PM

Barbara, Wonderful win.................. SKAT

Joyce Johnson

Date: 10/17/2015 11:47:00 PM

Very nicely done. congratulations on your high placement. I like it very much. Love, Joyce

Jan Allison

Date: 10/17/2015 9:12:00 PM

Dropping back with my congrats Barbara - its 3.11 and and I'm STILL awake:-) hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/17/2015 8:53:00 PM

a wonderful inspirational message in yours. Congrats, Barbara.

Sandra Haight

Date: 10/13/2015 2:34:00 PM

Very soothing to read -- almost like a lullaby, Barbara. Enjoyed this very much, and I wish you all the best for the contest. Hugs, Sandra

Caycay Jennings

Date: 10/7/2015 4:19:00 AM

A very beautiful Andaree - good luck in the contest. I enjoyed reading it ... CayCay

Michael Tor

Date: 10/7/2015 2:44:00 AM

Barbara this is beautiful and true. Sleep the way is described here is awesome. Everyone should have this every night. Thank you for sharing. A 7 for sure.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/6/2015 11:33:00 PM

Barbara, I wonder how mine would read if I ever did stunning poem like this. Anyways, I'm off to sleep, this is the perfect poem to end my night with. Who knows where my dreams will take me. LINDA

Laura Leiser

Date: 10/6/2015 11:14:00 PM

Oops, I meant to say Andaree!

Laura Leiser

Date: 10/6/2015 11:12:00 PM

Very beautiful etheree, Barbara! Enjoyed this very much. Good luck in the contest:)

Jan Allison

Date: 10/6/2015 10:07:00 PM

Its 04.05 am I wish I could sleep!!!!! Am going to try again your poem has inspired me to want to dream:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx