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Are we all not children at heart Tell us we cannot have something And we want nothing else but

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Date: 2/1/2021 1:18:00 PM
This would make a great haiku or senryu Christopher, it’s screaming at you, like the children in your poem, I really think you should try the form, get your point across much stronger, cheers David
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Christopher Flaherty
Date: 2/3/2021 1:32:00 PM
Cheers David thank you very much

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