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Ink's Roses or Fireflies Contest ~ February 7, 2025

I stared enrapt and enamored as twilight took hold, mesmerized as the meadow shimmered in gold. Dusk dimmed and gave way to the moon, as she took her throne on this ebon night. I was enchanted by movements that caught my eye. Gilded lights that glimmered and glowed, hovering to and fro over the glade. They seemed to come alive once twilight faded, mysteriously moving as if wee faeries were parading all about. An army of diminutive dancers, they seemed to me to be, waltzing beneath a pallid moon to a sweet song from nightingales trilling a torchlight tune. It was a summertime symphony, a serenade in an open-air glen illuminated by fireflies flickering their way to the fen. Merrily, they fluttered in flight on tiny will-O'-the wisp wings Little lanterns in the night sky, luminous kites untethered by strings. O' how I yearned to walk among them in hopes they would alight on me. What a delightful experience that would have proven to be. But I dare not move an inch for fear I'd cause a colossal tragedy. Not one fragile lightning sprite did I want to frighten with alarm nor risk the size of me would bring even one of them harm. Too soon, to my chagrin, I was all alone in the meadow. A sudden cloud burst, and rain began to pour. I found myself wishing the firefly fairytale would've lasted a few minutes more. Gone, the swarm of twinkling amber lights. They'd disappeared in the blink of my eyes. "Fly, little fireflies. Off into the sky." I sighed and with whispered breath I said, "Perhaps we'll soon meet again when you dance beneath a pallid moon."

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Date: 2/21/2025 9:07:00 AM
Beautiful, artful alliteration! Congratulations! Xo
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Date: 2/21/2025 4:59:00 AM
Love your wording, lin! Just beautiful! Congrats!
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Date: 2/21/2025 2:44:00 AM
Dear Lin, this is so beautiful how you’ve told us readers the story as you took me on this journey, filled with magic , ephemeral yet forever etched as memories! How stunning! Reminds me also of an experience i had with fireflies in srilanka. We dont get fireflies in the maldives tho, you have a very artistic way of expressing and weaving words! And this is no exception! I read this twice and was in awe of how you’ve creatively woven words along with your seamless alliterations. Thank you for supporting my contest. Congratulations on your well deserved win
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Date: 2/8/2025 4:12:00 PM
Lin, beautiful poem ... alone in a meadow. Your poem is vivid, and it paints a picture that I would love to see.
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Date: 2/10/2025 7:09:00 AM
Thank you, Connie. Wouldn't it be wonderful if our imaginary visions could become real?
Date: 2/8/2025 4:44:00 AM
An enjoyable read Lin, you never disappoint your reader. I saw one once in Turkey, yes, just one, I was facinated, at first I thought it was someone with a laser light. Best of luck in the contest and enjoy your weekend. Tom
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Date: 2/8/2025 5:04:00 AM
once... aww. When I was a child, I lived on a farm and lightning bugs were everywhere on summer nights. So were dragonflies, that we called mosquito hawks. Gold, green and a lovely shade of blue. There aren't nearly so many of them now... sad. Thanks for your contest and weekend wishes. Back at ya, Tom.
Date: 2/8/2025 3:15:00 AM
I congratulate you for this beautiful poem. I have not yet posted my miserable specimen, but reading your poem, I have no earthly chance of getting a better place. Your poem enchanted me. Well done.
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Date: 2/8/2025 4:33:00 AM
Victor, I have never read a poem by you that should be called "a miserable specimen." With sincere humility, thank you for finding my lines enchanting. Please, post yours and enter it. I'm sure it's more than worthy of being complimented.
Date: 2/7/2025 3:25:00 PM
Your narrative captivated me. It was so easy to let your poem take me away. I get lost in your imagery and phrasing. Just beautiful, Lin ... CayCay
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Date: 2/7/2025 7:26:00 PM
To imagine yourself in my poem through the imagery I portrayed is a great compliment. Thank you so very much, CayCay.

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