Sky Diving

Gathering odd bits and scattered pieces
I lay on silken sheets of pristine white,
a soft, lavender scent, aired, releases ...
daily sorrows and fears of painful night.
Rising on an astral cord, I hover
all smiling at my earthly nascent self,
wandering, wondering, fractals a glow 
we light beings uncover
a unifying geometry ourselves.
Do come, come and join our playful tableau. 

Dark interiors pale, as outside I rise
peeking but briefly within where I lay
and I nod to self, then up to the sky
with spirit animals along to play.
The wolves howl with joy, the owls soar high
we stitch herringbone patterns gray on blue 
as we loft like birds above forest tall
giving bedside good byes.
High above the earth, we have quite a view
as with rainbows of lights we're enthralled.

From space earth's sphere seems an implausible dream
continents and oceans blue, brown and white
as refreshed we gleam, streaming home on beams  
fired solar flares of brilliant delight.
Down, down, we go to just outside the pane
and giggling, I peek through the window shade
myself wound in, on umbilical thin,
whole without a complaint.
Four guardians, I hug and thank for their aide
and slip beneath the silk sheets, all tucked in.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 1/14/2014 6:14:00 AM
A fine Ode and congratulations on the win, Debbie
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Date: 1/13/2014 2:25:00 PM
DEBBIE, :) CONGRATS.... Love ~ SKAT~
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Date: 4/27/2012 7:24:00 AM
Congrats on your win Deb...dream is such a fantastic thing, especially in your mild, energetic portrayal. Much Love.~. O.O.
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Date: 4/17/2012 6:57:00 PM
hey, it looks like maybe you killed two birds with one stone? Looks like for two contests. Awesome work, Debs. Big congrats for your win!!
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Date: 4/17/2012 3:49:00 PM
Congrats on your winning work..Sara
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Date: 4/17/2012 8:52:00 AM
Debs very well done ..... ..a hugely deserved high placement.....loads of beauty in it but my fav is "streaming home on beams" (dont know why but it just caught me...i will probably steal the phrase and use it sometime ......... I loves it) . . . . . . so sue me ! ....................best wishes a s always .... Syd
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Date: 4/17/2012 8:44:00 AM
Ahh, to spend the day in bed and imagine flying, dozing, and living in a dream such wonderful things! Perfect way to spend a rainy day!
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Date: 4/17/2012 5:44:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Debbie!! A lovely journey you have taken me on this morning. I love how your playing with animals and giggling so childlike. Well done!This is as close as I'll ever get to skydiving in this lifetime !!
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Date: 4/17/2012 5:14:00 AM
Congratulations on your super 1st place win in Cyndi's "Ode To Small Comforts" contest Debbie. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/17/2012 1:03:00 AM
What a wonderful experience,sky diving and awesome piece of poetry..Good presentation...Congratulations on your 1st place win in Cyndi`s contest....Light and love..
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Date: 4/17/2012 12:14:00 AM
Now that's how it's done!! Brava! Congratulations on your well deserved win here Debbie!!! What a wonderful journey it was! big hugs, love deb (thank you for all you are doing to help me see... :) )
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Date: 4/16/2012 11:16:00 PM
I agree with Cyndi that this was worthy of first place. Congratulations. Delighted to share with you. Love, Joyce
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Date: 4/16/2012 8:51:00 PM
Congratulation, Debbie, on your first place win. Hey, stop by my blog, please, when you can. I like to provide details to my winners. Cold is GONE. POOF. Greens, probiotics, no sugar... ha! works! Hugs, Cyndi
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Date: 4/16/2012 8:48:00 PM
This is extraordinary, Debbie...congrats on imagery beyond compare! I love the ending and the beginning...all tied up like a perfect bow! Gwendolen
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Date: 3/23/2012 5:20:00 AM
While stopping by to read your wonderful poetry I want to say thank you for the kind comments you have left on mine. I hope you have a beautiful weekend and find it full of inspiration Debbie. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/18/2012 10:38:00 PM
As Vie says, Debbie, this poem was a real treat to read. Love, Maureen
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Date: 3/18/2012 8:23:00 PM
Debbie, this is very beautiful... the picture gave it a good feel,, goes with the pattern of your poem... very cozy.. have yourself a good night~ always*PD
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Date: 3/18/2012 6:58:00 PM
Its beautiful Debbie..well worth taking all day to post.. Hugs xxx
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Date: 3/18/2012 6:52:00 PM
If this is for the contest, then you have accomplished everything called for in this type of writing. Well written and an enjoyable read.
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