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Skis, Please

Skis on my feet, I'm ready to glide, Kicking snow, I'm gonna slowly slide, It's been a snowy week, my, oh my! In crunching snow, I'm raring to fly, Now, I soar down the hill with these skis, Going at top speed, help me stop, please!! 19th Jan 2023 Contest: Skiing Sponsor: Julia Ward

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Len Gasun

Date: 2/5/2023 3:54:00 AM

Oh, such a very beautiful, fantastic view and a delightful show my dear friend Jo! Congratulations on your first place win and this stellar winter poem! Hugs

Connie Pachecho

Date: 1/25/2023 2:24:00 PM

You skied to the top of the mountain. Good one. Congratulations.

I Am Anaya

Date: 1/25/2023 9:12:00 AM

Congratulations on your top win, Jo! The image of soaring downhill, then terrified you won't stop was my reality! Lol

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 1/25/2023 6:22:00 AM

LOL Jo. Wonderful image here! Congratulations on your top win! :)

Michael Wegman

Date: 1/25/2023 3:27:00 AM

Wonderful! Congrats on the win! Well done!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/21/2023 10:18:00 AM

love this. you made it so FUN

Sam Kauffman

Date: 1/19/2023 1:49:00 PM

Cute! Best wishes for the contest! Blessings for a stop before that snowbank!

Tom Cunningham

Date: 1/19/2023 5:34:00 AM

Have never tried it Jo, don't they come with brakes then lol. Good luck in the contest. Tom

Vijay Pandit

Date: 1/19/2023 4:58:00 AM

Bouncing with joy--a delightful poem, Jo. Best to you.

Joe Dimino

Date: 1/19/2023 4:09:00 AM

:) More than you required. Love it! You've given me a smile to start the day.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/19/2023 3:19:00 AM

Reads like a good contender to me for the contest. Way to go. It looks like it would be fun, but I have always wondered how bad it would be if one fell. Thanks for sharing and for stopping by my page. Sara