Skis, Please


Skis on my feet, I'm ready to glide, 
Kicking snow, I'm gonna slowly slide, 
It's been a snowy week, my, oh my! 
In crunching snow, I'm raring to fly, 
Now, I soar down the hill with these skis, 
Going at top speed, help me stop, please!! 



19th Jan 2023

Contest: Skiing
Sponsor: Julia Ward
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Gasun Avatar
February 5, 2023 at 3:54 AM
Oh, such a very beautiful, fantastic view and a delightful show my dear friend Jo! Congratulations on your first place win and this stellar winter poem! Hugs
Pachecho Avatar
January 25, 2023 at 2:24 PM
You skied to the top of the mountain. Good one. Congratulations.
Anaya Avatar
January 25, 2023 at 9:12 AM
Congratulations on your top win, Jo! The image of soaring downhill, then terrified you won't stop was my reality! Lol
Fowler Avatar
January 25, 2023 at 6:22 AM
LOL Jo. Wonderful image here! Congratulations on your top win! :)
Wegman Avatar
January 25, 2023 at 3:27 AM
Wonderful! Congrats on the win! Well done!
Dietrich Avatar
January 21, 2023 at 10:18 AM
love this. you made it so FUN
Kauffman Avatar
January 19, 2023 at 1:49 PM
Cute! Best wishes for the contest! Blessings for a stop before that snowbank!
Cunningham Avatar
January 19, 2023 at 5:34 AM
Have never tried it Jo, don't they come with brakes then lol. Good luck in the contest. Tom
Pandit Avatar
January 19, 2023 at 4:58 AM
Bouncing with joy--a delightful poem, Jo. Best to you.
DiMino Avatar
January 19, 2023 at 4:09 AM
:) More than you required. Love it! You've given me a smile to start the day.
Kendrick Avatar
January 19, 2023 at 3:19 AM
Reads like a good contender to me for the contest. Way to go. It looks like it would be fun, but I have always wondered how bad it would be if one fell. Thanks for sharing and for stopping by my page. Sara
Messina Avatar
January 19, 2023 at 3:14 AM
LOL...cute poem, Jo. Best wishes in the contest. I've climbed mountains and jumped out of a plane, but I never went skiing...too afraid (lol)
George Avatar
January 19, 2023 at 1:01 AM
I have seen skiing only in pictures as we have no snow here. But we can imagine many things . Beautiful Acrostic... dear Jo. All the Best...
Logan Avatar
January 18, 2023 at 8:41 PM
I've never been a skier. Good luck in that contest.
Faulkner Avatar
January 18, 2023 at 8:26 PM
I've never been skiing, I'm too afraid of breaking my legs! Best wishes for the contest~
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