Andrea Dietrich Poet Quintain (English)

Skin

The whisper of your skin
dissolving into mine -
the weight of it is kin
to that of wings of butterflies - divine
deliciousness I can’t define!

My precious love -
We meld into a sky of night that’s never been
so breathlessly partaken of
nor ever will again.
Exquisitely you paint my sweetest sin.

For PD's Any Poem # 28 Free Poetry Contest

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Aiyah Torres May 9, 2014 at 8:12 AM and I qoute.. " exquisitely you paint my sweetest sin"... That's electrifyingly great line I've ever read... WOooo!!! ..it's getting hot in here.. ahaha.. very well expressed of intimate moment.. Skin-to-skin.... that all our sweetest sin started.. lol.. :O)) CONGRATULATIONS!!! ^_^

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser May 9, 2014 at 5:48 AM it's like heaven and hell coming to collide.. breathtaking rhyme and imagery.. whisper of skin arousing images.... fantastic write. :) CONGRATULATIONS Andrea.. :)!, olive eloisa here.. GBU.. :)

Faye Gibson May 8, 2014 at 3:35 PM Beautifully expressed...congrats!

Joseph May May 8, 2014 at 1:13 PM Lovely write...congrats on your win

Dr. Upma A. Sharma May 8, 2014 at 12:10 PM Witty wid romance end to end Andrea ! Congrats on great win !

Paul Callus May 8, 2014 at 10:29 AM I adore "the whisper of your skin" that flows into the heart of a beautiful romantic write! going to favs.:) congrats. // paul

Poet Destroyer A May 8, 2014 at 10:04 AM haha I never expected this one to be yours Andrea, WOW..WOW~ love it... the ending was... WOWlicious .:) . Thank you so much for enjoying and supporting my "ANY POEM" contest...... Stop by my latest blog --Raindrops and roses-- if you'd like to receive a cute Congratulations. Wishing all winning poets a great day. Love Linda :-)

Harry Horsman October 10, 2012 at 5:34 AM this is so beautiful, and breathtaking, that last line, is so classical,,,

Jack Horne August 6, 2012 at 9:39 AM very much enjoyed this one again, Andrea - I see I was the last to read it last time

Jack Horne May 6, 2011 at 9:45 AM Wow, how romantic and beautiful, Andrea! I missed this one somehow. And I see it was a winner : )

James Foulk May 3, 2011 at 10:50 AM a great piece of poetry. thank for reading and commenting on Sweet Erika.

George Aul April 1, 2011 at 9:12 AM Great write for a win in the contest ..... Thanks for all the nice words.....George

Carol Fillmore March 29, 2011 at 4:34 PM This is very sensual and romantic indeed...love "the weight of it is kin to that of wings of butterflies..." reminds me of poetry of 19thC:) Congrats on your win. Thank you for adding me to your fav poets:) I too have been negligent of adding some fav poets/poetry, like you...am now correcting this omission! Carol

Audrey Haick March 28, 2011 at 6:27 PM I miss this! Very sensual and romantic, Andrea! Congratulations on your wonderful win in Paula's contest! Always, Annalise

Sidney Beck March 28, 2011 at 9:16 AM This is a very nice, unpretensious poem and it reminds me of some other famous poets such as Dylan Thomas - and Keats with his "negative capability" approach....maybe these are also 2 of your fav poets too? Well written...sincere congratulations...Syd

Gwendolen Song March 25, 2011 at 1:19 AM This poem speaks of a moment that will only happy once and is undefinable. True passion creating a true win! Gwendolen :)

Tahera Mannan March 24, 2011 at 9:31 PM A lovely and very sweet sin. Many congrats dear friend.

Joyce Johnson March 24, 2011 at 7:00 PM This is really tender Andrea. Congratulations. Love, Joyce

John Freeman March 24, 2011 at 6:34 PM Looks like you filled the bill rather well Andrea. Congratulations on an honored seventh place. Agape, Moses

Linda-Marie Sweetheart March 24, 2011 at 2:34 PM Congrats Andrea on your great big win in Francine's contest with these awesome words my friend.. enjoy your sweet success with lovely words that u create from your gifted pen my friend..

Debbie Guzzi March 24, 2011 at 2:24 PM tantilizing win! Congrad's Light & Love always!

Sara Kendrick March 24, 2011 at 1:10 PM Congratulations on your win..Sara

Carol Sunshine Brown March 24, 2011 at 12:10 PM Congratulations on your win in Francine's "Make Me Swoon" contest Andrea. Love, Carol

Elaine George March 24, 2011 at 11:10 AM Hi Andrea, Loved this the first time around. New it would be in the winners circle. Many congrat's. La inie

Jack Horne March 24, 2011 at 11:01 AM Lovely poem, Andrea - many congrats :) Jack

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