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The whisper of your skin dissolving into mine - the weight of it is kin to that of wings of butterflies - divine deliciousness I can’t define! My precious love - We meld into a sky of night that’s never been so breathlessly partaken of nor ever will again. Exquisitely you paint my sweetest sin. For PD's Any Poem # 28 Free Poetry Contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 5/9/2014 8:12:00 AM
and I qoute.. " exquisitely you paint my sweetest sin"... That's electrifyingly great line I've ever read... WOooo!!! ..it's getting hot in here.. ahaha.. very well expressed of intimate moment.. Skin-to-skin.... that all our sweetest sin started.. lol.. :O)) CONGRATULATIONS!!! ^_^
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Date: 5/9/2014 5:48:00 AM
it's like heaven and hell coming to collide.. breathtaking rhyme and imagery.. whisper of skin arousing images.... fantastic write. :) CONGRATULATIONS Andrea.. :)!, olive eloisa here.. GBU.. :)
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Date: 5/8/2014 3:35:00 PM
Beautifully expressed...congrats!
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Date: 5/8/2014 1:13:00 PM
Lovely write...congrats on your win
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Date: 5/8/2014 12:10:00 PM
Witty wid romance end to end Andrea ! Congrats on great win !
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Date: 5/8/2014 10:29:00 AM
I adore "the whisper of your skin" that flows into the heart of a beautiful romantic write! going to favs.:) congrats. // paul
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Date: 5/8/2014 10:04:00 AM
haha I never expected this one to be yours Andrea, WOW..WOW~ love it... the ending was... WOWlicious .:) . Thank you so much for enjoying and supporting my "ANY POEM" contest...... Stop by my latest blog --Raindrops and roses-- if you'd like to receive a cute Congratulations. Wishing all winning poets a great day. Love Linda :-)
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Date: 10/10/2012 5:34:00 AM
this is so beautiful, and breathtaking, that last line, is so classical,,,
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Date: 8/6/2012 9:39:00 AM
very much enjoyed this one again, Andrea - I see I was the last to read it last time
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Date: 5/6/2011 9:45:00 AM
Wow, how romantic and beautiful, Andrea! I missed this one somehow. And I see it was a winner : )
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Date: 5/3/2011 10:50:00 AM
a great piece of poetry. thank for reading and commenting on Sweet Erika.
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Date: 4/1/2011 9:12:00 AM
Great write for a win in the contest ..... Thanks for all the nice words.....George
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Date: 3/29/2011 4:34:00 PM
This is very sensual and romantic indeed...love "the weight of it is kin to that of wings of butterflies..." reminds me of poetry of 19thC:) Congrats on your win. Thank you for adding me to your fav poets:) I too have been negligent of adding some fav poets/poetry, like you...am now correcting this omission! Carol
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Date: 3/28/2011 6:27:00 PM
I miss this! Very sensual and romantic, Andrea! Congratulations on your wonderful win in Paula's contest! Always, Annalise
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Date: 3/28/2011 9:16:00 AM
This is a very nice, unpretensious poem and it reminds me of some other famous poets such as Dylan Thomas - and Keats with his "negative capability" approach....maybe these are also 2 of your fav poets too? Well written...sincere congratulations...Syd
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Date: 3/25/2011 1:19:00 AM
This poem speaks of a moment that will only happy once and is undefinable. True passion creating a true win! Gwendolen :)
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Date: 3/24/2011 9:31:00 PM
A lovely and very sweet sin. Many congrats dear friend.
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Date: 3/24/2011 7:00:00 PM
This is really tender Andrea. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 3/24/2011 6:34:00 PM
Looks like you filled the bill rather well Andrea. Congratulations on an honored seventh place. Agape, Moses
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Date: 3/24/2011 2:34:00 PM
Congrats Andrea on your great big win in Francine's contest with these awesome words my friend.. enjoy your sweet success with lovely words that u create from your gifted pen my friend..
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Date: 3/24/2011 2:24:00 PM
tantilizing win! Congrad's Light & Love always!
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Date: 3/24/2011 1:10:00 PM
Congratulations on your win..Sara
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Date: 3/24/2011 12:10:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in Francine's "Make Me Swoon" contest Andrea. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/24/2011 11:10:00 AM
Hi Andrea, Loved this the first time around. New it would be in the winners circle. Many congrat's. La inie
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Date: 3/24/2011 11:01:00 AM
Lovely poem, Andrea - many congrats :) Jack
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