Written February 20, 2025
For"Skating on Saturn's Rings" contest
by Sara Jama
Come! We'll fall into Saturn's ice arms We'll skate on her rings as moons arise On my toes, I'll spin woes into charms see amethyst form storm's sultry skies Smile at lightning's attempted disguise. We'll skate together and then alone leaving imprints, as settlers perhaps Marking a path for others to own among icey confines, Nature's lapse finding wonder, unable to grasp Skating back and forth on Saturn's rings, you stop to stir stardust into night Enchanted moments we hope to bring in dreams, perhaps. or by candlelight songs of the Muses, in frigid flight Wayward clouds, silken-spun, drift away They waltzed in tunes from a spilling crest Dawn's faint hues entice night into day I gather stars and place in your vest Sadly, we leave, for we were but guests
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