Skating upon Saturn's Rings
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For Sara Jama's contest
I oscillate between gliding and drifting
unable to catch a breeze or catch my breath
awareness existing artfully inside asphyxiation
savour the moments
where ice meets blade
relinquish self fully
to weightless cascade
atmospheric haze transmutes into mind
willed limbs skate onwards
through all that chokes
focus on a single point
let your echoes stream forever
forgetting creates flow state
don't misstep on never-never
endless haunting of the circuits
disrupts construction of existence
maybe vastness needed
to foil emptiness resistance
Copyright © Di11y Da11y | Year Posted 2025
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