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Skater's Show

The leaves are rusty colored, like metal when it’s old Some are wrinkled from the arrival of air that’s cold Waiting for coverage from a blanket of white satin snow Scattered piles of autumn’s memories are laying around Sometimes running away with a gust, new places to be found The ground isn’t frozen yet, but temperatures dive at night Either way, the sunshine makes everything look bright Even rusty leaves can glow, as the sparkling brook will flow Ponds will later turn to ice, shining for the skater’s show Heidi Sands 11/4/21

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Date: 1/17/2022 9:07:00 PM
Heidi, I love this one. We had a pond in our Vt. backyard we would shovel off & skate on when my kids were little. Your poem brought back that nice memory and other lovely images for me. It paints such a beautiful picture. My senses came alive as I read it.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 1/19/2022 6:12:00 AM
Oh wow. That is so nice to have enjoyed the pond in your yard and the skating. I am happy this could bring back nice memory. Thank you for your comment :)
Date: 11/5/2021 9:18:00 PM
Hello Heidi ... we are moving away towards summer, but the picture you have written reminds me that winter can arrive too soon. Very muggy here today with storms on the way - thank you Heidi - Lindsay
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Heidi Sands
Date: 11/6/2021 6:56:00 AM
Hi Lindsay. It is starting here. Frost in the area and snow on the distant mountains. Thank you for your visit and comment. I hope all is well :)
Date: 11/5/2021 12:40:00 PM
Beautiful picture of autumn and early winter, Heidi! Even though winter is cold and looks barren there is a singular and unique beauty to this time of rest and hibernation - time to look forward to seasonal fun! Blessings!
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Heidi Sands
Date: 11/5/2021 12:53:00 PM
Thank you Sam. I look forward to the beautiful winter sights here. Right now, there is snow on the distant mountain, I took a photo of. :)
Date: 11/5/2021 7:51:00 AM
Beautiful Autumn write Heidi.. :)
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Date: 11/5/2021 10:36:00 AM
Thank you Joseph. I hope you have a nice day :)
Date: 11/4/2021 7:48:00 PM
Love to see the skating stars on the 'shining ponds,' as you've put it, Heidi. Here's to 'Winter's Carnival.' ~ Gershon
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Date: 11/5/2021 10:35:00 AM
Thank you Gershon. They do have a winter carnival here. I love ice skating. I hope your day is going well :)

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