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Six-Word Couplet Series Encore

Comfortable Walking Shoes Tattered, dusty soles Complete with holes Brisk Weather Summer heat adjourns Autumn wind churns Beware Flying Objects Acorn hits head (Better than lead!) Washed Out Trail Moist air foggy Makes ground soggy Watch Your Step Trip on stump Foot sports lump Evening Falls Better hustle home Lose map? Roam Dinner Bell Rings Follow that sound Find home ground October 10, 2018 Contest: Six-Word Couplet Series Encore Sponsored by Mark Toney

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Paul Callus

Date: 12/4/2018 8:19:00 AM

Back with congratulations, Carolyn! Always a pleasure to stand at the top of the podium. Hugs // paul

Mark Toney

Date: 12/3/2018 6:28:00 PM

Carolyn, thank you for entering the contest, and congratulations on your first place finish! I enjoyed taking that walk with you :) ~Mark

Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 12/3/2018 7:09:00 PM

Thank you, Mark. I really enjoyed writing in this form!

Jay Moore

Date: 11/3/2018 12:45:00 AM

Hilariously awesome girl!

Gershon Wolf

Date: 10/19/2018 12:38:00 PM

These great couplets are going to take a hike ride to the top of the winner's list where they belong. Super! ~ Gershon

Paul Callus

Date: 10/16/2018 1:16:00 PM

I would gladly take a hike with you, Carolyn...despite everything you sure know how to find the way back home:) Time for me to work on some couplets, now before the contest fills up! Hugs // paul

Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 10/16/2018 3:50:00 PM

You'll have fun with them, Paul. Thanks for checking in!

Constance La France

Date: 10/15/2018 6:34:00 PM

Carolyn, I just love your couplets for the contest, wonderful and amusing ~

Rico Leffanta

Date: 10/15/2018 5:17:00 PM

Your attitude shines in BFO, so we know there are more good words coming! Welcome back! Aloha, Rico

John Gondolf

Date: 10/14/2018 11:27:00 AM

Enjoyed your little story brought together by these couplets, Carolyn, nicely done. Best of luck. John

Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 10/15/2018 10:51:00 AM

Thank you, John. Hope you will write for my sonnet contest. Hugs, Carolyn

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 10/13/2018 4:55:00 AM

What a beautiful string of couplets Carolyn, I so loved this poem, and could visualize the hazards hikers come across so vividly penned by you! xoxo Jennifer

Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 10/14/2018 10:40:00 AM

Thank you, Jennifer. I just read and was very moved by your poem about animals fleeing a wildfire. Nice work.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 10/10/2018 11:47:00 PM

Wow Carolyn, these are excellent! I couldn't come up with any. I know these will do well! : )

Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 10/11/2018 12:24:00 PM

LOL These are easy to write, Hon, and it's fun to try a different light form once in a while. Thanks for reading.

Vladislav Raven

Date: 10/10/2018 6:25:00 PM

Hi Carolyn, a group of wonderful, fun couplets you put before us. Each one strong on its own, even stronger when placed in a group. Always enjoy having a smile and a giggle. Wishing you the best of luck in the contest. Have a wonderful Thursday. Hugs....Mike. XX

Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 10/11/2018 12:28:00 PM

Thank you, Vladislav. I'll have to check out your work now.

Duke Beaufort

Date: 10/10/2018 5:38:00 PM

Very cute and bringing a big smile to my generally serious disposition. I love to laugh. Thanks for this.

James Horn

Date: 10/10/2018 9:54:00 AM

Love them all, tall and small; Had been married; Child she carried; Will not fall, And did appall; In need dire; Joined the choir; With God perch; Went to church; And better yet, Never forget. Haille also has the South Carolina State symbol in her necklace.

Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 10/10/2018 11:59:00 AM

I had the spelling wrong - it's Haley. She says she will campaign for Pres. Trump in 2020, but that could change. And I enjoyed your couplets too! Thanks for the visit, James!

Winged Warrior

Date: 10/10/2018 8:50:00 AM

Lovely set of couplets, Carolyn...ready for a win my friend...and take a hike, eh! lol...love & light...^WW^

Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 10/14/2018 10:38:00 AM

Thank you, WW. Some of my friends are marveling at how quickly our graduating class is dying off now. I think Marianne's spirit has been offering comfort to all who mourn her.

Winged Warrior
Date: 10/11/2018 6:01:00 PM

...I hear you Carolyn...I am so sorry my friend, I had no idea...may the Angels comfort you, and heal you...love & internal light...^WW^

Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 10/10/2018 12:21:00 PM

Thanks, Hon. After my illness it was more than a month before I could write anything again. These couplets were easy, but I'm still mourning Marianne's death and it's very difficult for me to write anything meaningful.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 10/10/2018 8:32:00 AM

Well written couplets Carolyn, good luck. Tom.

Chris Green

Date: 10/10/2018 7:59:00 AM

These were fun Carolyn. I enjoyed each one of them, especially "Beware of flying objects" : ) Much luck in the contest

Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 10/10/2018 8:02:00 AM

This form is surprisingly easy to write, Chris. Had fun with this. Thanks for visiting, Carolyn