Sitting On the Bench

Sitting on a bench in Blue Water Park People walking by with the dogs that bark

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Ronald A. Williams

Date: 8/10/2017 8:19:00 AM

Maybe more expression, with such a short poem.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 8/12/2017 12:20:00 PM

Thank you I will do another one a bit different with expression. I am learning. Nice to meet you Ronald.

Alfred Berggren

Date: 7/15/2017 5:47:00 PM

Dogs can be a bother that way.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/16/2017 11:47:00 AM

Some dogs are very vocal and bark at anything that comes their way. Yet it enjoyable to sit in a park that has a pond or a river to look at. It is very calming for the soul. Have a good day my friend.

Edward Mccall

Date: 4/27/2017 11:11:00 PM

Humor is always a good thing you have a great way with two line humor Darlene

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 4/29/2017 5:12:00 PM

Yes Edward it is a good thing to have a good sense of humor..

Akkina Downing

Date: 4/26/2017 7:04:00 PM

I love this too. And I can relate to this, sitting in the park and watch the people walking their dogs. Lol!

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 4/27/2017 9:06:00 AM

Hello Akkina,I saw lots of people walking their dogs and they were barking.

Chris Green

Date: 4/26/2017 5:54:00 PM

This was cute Darlene, just a little poetic slice of life. :)

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 4/27/2017 9:07:00 AM

Hello Chris,thank you It was a fun write write.