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Sitting Lark

He plays a song passed down for centuries, By a nation that exists no more; On a flute carved from a sycamore tree, While sitting on the forest floor. His father was a tribal chief, For a people who once were great; Now living on welfare relief - His punishment for being born too late. Holding fast to his cultural ties, He is the last of a dying breed; Not succumbing to a history of lies; Warnings to fit in, he does not heed. At home by himself in the thick of the woods, Under a full moon in the quiet breeze; He lives his life the way that he should - The last to play this melody. by, Joe Flach for Constance's "Tell His Story" Contest

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Date: 3/22/2011 1:21:00 PM
Congratulations on the tenth place win in the contest of Constance, Joe
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Date: 3/22/2011 12:30:00 PM
Congratulations on your deserving win in Constance's contest, Joe! Incredible story you 've told so well. Always, Annalise
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Date: 3/22/2011 11:55:00 AM
Always a pleasure to see you in the top ten, Joe. Congratulations on your worthy poem's honored tenth place. Agape, Moses
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Date: 3/22/2011 11:26:00 AM
Congratulations Joe on your super win in Constance's contest " Tell His Story". Love, Carol
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Date: 3/22/2011 9:24:00 AM
This was such a moving poem, Joe. Congratulations on your win in Constance's contest! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 3/22/2011 9:16:00 AM
Heart-wrenchingly beautiful and so beautifully written conveying the plight of these beautiful PROUD PEOPLE. Number one in my books and going to my fav's today, Joe. Lainie
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Date: 3/22/2011 8:09:00 AM
Another wonderful tale of the sad fate of the lost tribes. Well done, Joe!
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Date: 3/22/2011 6:35:00 AM
Oh my...this is so sad..congrats on your fine win.BG
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Date: 3/22/2011 12:32:00 AM
Congrats to you Joe great to see your win here.
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Date: 3/21/2011 11:46:00 PM
stunning! my happy cheers to you for the special win, joe :) huggs, nette
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Date: 3/21/2011 9:07:00 PM
Heartiest congratulations for this win.
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Date: 3/21/2011 8:55:00 PM
Very sweet rhyme. Love, Joyce
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Date: 3/21/2011 8:36:00 PM
Congrats Joe on your super win in Tell His Story contest with this stunning write so very expressive my friend.. enjoy another top ten victory with luv..
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Date: 3/18/2011 6:18:00 PM
Nice story poem and rich with culture. I hope he continues to pass along his tribal ways. Gwendolen
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Date: 3/16/2011 7:57:00 PM
Thank you for supporting my contest, Joe, I really like your take on the inspiration image~~
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Date: 3/16/2011 4:12:00 PM
There did seem to be quite a sadness in the picture, Joe. Some have interpreted as mourning a lost heritage, others a lost love. But I like the way you describe him as playing a song that was passed down by a tribe that no longer exists. Best wishes in the contest. Love, Carolyn
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