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Sitting In My Deck Chair

The pale face of nature, of flowers and treetops Has been lost without color, behind frost in the meadow Under snow on the fence post, and the ice on the willow So tattered and bobbing, and weary of hiding So weary of biding her time in the fog Tired of the doldrums, tired of the ho-hums , and weary of crying... The pale face of nature, of gardens in springtime Will drink in this morning, to find it surprising! A lekker arrival !! Of sunkissed horizons Is blissfully welcomed with gold in the morning All smitten with cheer ! Trees lean to the side Drunk on the sun Lifting their branches And keeping it near I long for it too As I move out my chair From under the shade To drink in the sun After dark winter days To welcome it here A lekker arrival Is speckled in sunshine I find it to be fine, to bask on my deck! I'll poke out my neck to soak in the bliss And what could be better than this? Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh! ________________________________________________________ For Suzette's Contest: "LEKKER" >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>

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Date: 3/2/2013 7:21:00 AM
Big and heartfelt congratulations on your super win, Carrie! Your poem conveys lively imagery and great expectations of a wonderful Lekker arrival! I love how you finished your poem with this funny line, " And what could be better than this? Ahhhh! " Thanks for your comment on my poem yesterday. Have a blessed weekend. Best wishes. Peace & Love, Andrew.
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Date: 3/1/2013 9:41:00 PM
Carrie, a nice winning poem...PD
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Date: 2/28/2013 7:14:00 PM
Congratulations on a very fine win, Carrie! I enjoyed this very much! Love, Annalise
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Date: 2/28/2013 7:06:00 PM
Congratulations with your win. This is a pleasantly descriptive entry.
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Date: 2/28/2013 7:04:00 PM
Sounds like a wonderful place to sit out. Could use a little more sunshine myself. Congrats on your win. Really enjoyed reading this poem...you took me into the scene.
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Date: 2/28/2013 6:42:00 PM
Sounds like spring came early in your neck of the woods. Congratulaitons on your win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 2/28/2013 4:18:00 PM
Congrats on your great win..Sara
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Date: 2/28/2013 2:27:00 PM
Congratulations Carrie ... Seren
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Date: 2/28/2013 12:24:00 PM
Congrats on your big win. Connie
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Date: 2/10/2013 2:17:00 PM
Oh , I love the way you painted this picture "awesome" going to fav's ;}
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Date: 2/6/2013 12:39:00 AM
gosh I am jealous how well you did lekker. I can't even start with that one!!! I just know this will be a sure win.
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Date: 2/4/2013 9:48:00 AM
Carrie love the whole image you have painted here, good luck and hope to see your great work in my contest....David
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Date: 2/3/2013 12:46:00 PM
Carrie, a delightful and uplifting poem for a winter day, I am so tired of winter.... burrrrr.. best of luck in the contest. Constance
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Date: 2/3/2013 10:17:00 AM
Wonderful imagery, Carrie! I enjyoyed reading your poem. Best wishes in the contest! Love, Kim
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