SIT-UPONS

Sit-upons that we wove together.
The troop activity. How many spots
will remember me?

The wicker basket and picnic blanket
woven into the amphitheatre. We,
my hubby and I,
cozied up, listened to Amy Grant.

My towel, with the Caribbean islands,
sinking in the warm sand, waiting
for my salt-sea body to rest.

My familiar easy chair,
the grandkids are always
welcome to share.

The pews that retain glory and praise
on Sundays and Wednesdays.

The split-level stairs,
carpeted teal,
where I oft sit and watch
somersaults
and converse with a houseful.

There are the horses,
that lent their backs,
brought me to greater heights -
walked me on the Cozumel beach,
‘round Yukon’s emerald lake,
and one that wanted to dive off a cliff,
“whoa…no!” I took control.

On my childhood bed,
so close to my sister-cousin.
We laughed and shared -
now it's only in my memory.

The yellow bus, -
my hopes and dreams were sown
within its polyester seats.

So many places where I sat,
brimming above or below the surface.
So many places we stay and go.
We squat, recline, attack.

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Date: 4/29/2024 6:52:00 PM
Lots of good memories on your "sit-upons", Kim. Brought back a lot of memories for me too, my friend. Especially all the Wednesday and Sundays. :-) I still watch Dr. Stanley on TV every Sunday. :-) I lived in Mariette when I lived in Georgia. Hope folks there are okay with that tornado hitting them. I'm praying for God's help for those involved. Hugs, Bill
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/29/2024 8:07:00 PM
That was Marietta in Oklahoma. So you used to live in Marietta, Georgia? Where? Thank you, Bill!
Date: 4/29/2024 2:33:00 AM
I almost felt like I was reading a Procul Harum song where ideas jump from one verse to another but which makes a delightful poem. Well done.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/29/2024 4:53:00 AM
Thank you so much :) Hugs ~ Kim
Date: 4/28/2024 6:30:00 PM
Uniqueness....that's you. I enjoyed my sit-upon at your page, reading this.... <3 it was really great
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/29/2024 5:04:00 AM
Thank you, sweet poet! :)
Date: 4/28/2024 10:29:00 AM
a very moving poem, we never forget places and people, thanks dear poet
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/28/2024 2:17:00 PM
Truly! thank you, Yann!
Date: 4/28/2024 10:25:00 AM
Oh how lovely and unique to make these mini universe where we sit to do our everyday life, a subject of a poem! I love this so much! It definitely gets me thinking about my sit upons, and thus my past. Bravo!!!!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/28/2024 2:18:00 PM
I love when we can bounce off each other. Glad you liked this!
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