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Sipping Thoughts

this day lingers on the edge of dusk as the moon rises less full then my mind with thoughts of you i can feel a breath of wind against my almost bare flesh it arouses me as shadows touch like fingers trembling beneath the folds of lust i feel the moisture within night's air my lips part as i sip the dew and drink thoughts of you the gleam of a thousand stars become your eyes reflecting back as me and i linger on the edge of night drunk on thoughts of you

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 5/8/2014 4:08:00 PM
Sandra... I LOVE YOUR FREE VERSE... your sipping thoughts are awesome.. Bravo to your style.. its romantic and ohhh I love romantic poems.. hugs Brooke
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Date: 12/27/2013 11:01:00 AM
romantic thoughts you've got here on such an occasion. Very expressive and imaginative. ~~ Always your friend, Wendy
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Date: 11/29/2013 7:04:00 PM
Wonderful mixed drink of love.
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Sandra Adams
Date: 11/29/2013 10:47:00 PM
thank you :)
Date: 11/27/2013 2:48:00 PM
soft heat slowly rising to kindle your words of flame, sandra.. delicate, delicious write... lovely!...i like your new avatar, glowing!..huggs
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Date: 11/27/2013 10:03:00 PM
Thank you Nette.... my blonde hair always looks so light in pictures, my son used some feature on the camera to make the colors glow like that, I thought it looked cool! hugs
Date: 11/27/2013 2:36:00 PM
- Sandra, this is wonderful! - Very, very well written my friend! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Sandra Adams
Date: 11/27/2013 10:00:00 PM
thank you Anne-Lise....hugs :)
Date: 11/27/2013 2:22:00 AM
good one Sandra.wonderful. (: ) Jenish.
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Sandra Adams
Date: 11/27/2013 11:02:00 AM
thank you Jenish :)
Date: 11/26/2013 11:16:00 PM
Wow ageless sensuous poem! Mail it to him wherever he is n watch d captivating effect it has pal.;) :) kudos to yor ravishing poet's pen.
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Sandra Adams
Date: 11/27/2013 11:03:00 AM
thank you... most of those close to me have no idea I even write...I do not share my poetry among my family and only two friends have ever seen any of them... hugs

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