Get Your Premium Membership

Sinister Hours

Poet's Notes
(Show)

Become a Premium Member and post notes and photos about your poem like Nette Onclaud.


And while the moon turns its light off, my vision blurs… a sylph- like form appears nearing the edge of my ghastly roam; its dark contours following me while smokey breath pulses with chilled air; till my will to survive takes over an animalistic gut, unsure if this sinister hours of terror can unleash a dreaded fear to bring me home safely , as I tremble in the pounding, black rain. ............. Dark Poetry Contest Sponsor: Nayda I. Negron

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 11/16/2015 9:20:00 PM
Congratulations. SKAT
Login to Reply
Date: 11/16/2015 9:31:00 AM
A gutsy write Nette! Congrats on your win!
Login to Reply
Date: 11/16/2015 8:38:00 AM
Congrats on this well deserved win nette...hugs
Login to Reply
Date: 11/16/2015 8:22:00 AM
Congratulations Nette
Login to Reply
Date: 10/20/2015 7:37:00 AM
ANOTHER SUPERB WRITE FROM YOUR TALENTED PEN. Good luck in that contest. A7
Login to Reply
Date: 10/19/2015 8:22:00 AM
Well done. I am properly creeped-out, by the scene you described and by the picture with the spirit wandering along the sidewalk with no legs.
Login to Reply
Date: 10/16/2015 8:40:00 PM
You certainly have succeeded in 'Creep me out' Nette, one can live on every word you pen,,this is poetry at its best..Oh and the Captcha is 888 is that suppose to be lucky in some parts of the world? i hope it is for you.
Login to Reply
Date: 10/15/2015 10:58:00 AM
You describe your experience perfectly and it takes shape in my mind’s eye. You imagery is top notch and brings life to the words. Emile.
Login to Reply
Date: 10/14/2015 4:47:00 PM
this really fits the contest perfectly, nette (and goes so well with the picture, too!). great poem!
Login to Reply
Date: 10/14/2015 3:56:00 PM
Great, Nette! a 7 at least!!! Wow you know how to really creep out a guy! Should be a winner! Excellent expression and imagery. Good luck in contest.
Login to Reply
Date: 10/14/2015 3:50:00 PM
The imagery is really chilling especially the suspenseful anticipation of "what is going to happen next?". Extraordinary poem!
Login to Reply
Date: 10/14/2015 3:05:00 PM
Love it
Login to Reply
Date: 10/14/2015 3:02:00 PM
- Creepy ..... however, interesting topic :) - I wish you good luck in the contest, Nette - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Login to Reply
Date: 10/14/2015 2:51:00 PM
Freakin' goosebumps! The ending being unanswered rattled me. Excellent poem!
Login to Reply
Date: 10/14/2015 1:41:00 PM
deep dark and creepy imagery Nette good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx
Login to Reply

Book: Reflection on the Important Things