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Sing Me a Song - Collaboration With Claudia Polydoro

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Write me a poem Sing me a song Kick me some ass Write me some words Jump me some air Give me some cake Blow me a kiss Show me you care Shake up my world Make me laugh Light up my days Bring me new breath Whip me a cream Shake me a drink Kiss me your tongue Make me believe Wrap me your arms Bend me a rule Trust me a secret Tell me your truth Hold me prison Call me your love Twist me inside Burn me your sun *** May 17, 2017 Copyright © Darren White and Claudia Polydoro

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Richard Lamoureux

Date: 5/20/2017 9:17:00 AM

It reads well forwards and backwards. I enjoyed this collaboration.

Darren White
Date: 5/20/2017 9:57:00 AM

It does indeed, like stairs, they work either way too. Thanks Richard :)

Arthur Vaso

Date: 5/19/2017 10:17:00 PM

You both gave me a smile, such beauty and harmony!

Darren White
Date: 5/20/2017 12:41:00 AM

Fun, isn't it :)

Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 5/19/2017 1:41:00 PM

A real laid-back style w/bounce and sass, Darren and Claudia. It's cool, poetic free-jack jazz. You two blow poetic words so well together. A creative 7! Love and smiles.

Darren White
Date: 5/19/2017 1:49:00 PM

Thank you, Freddie :) For the compliments, the 7 and the smiles :)

Chris Green

Date: 5/18/2017 3:33:00 PM

Such a creatively crafted piece from two absolutely wonderful poets. You two work so well together. I really like ho you built this and the word choices. This one does dance across the page. Bravo to both poets

Darren White
Date: 5/18/2017 10:04:00 PM

Fun, eh Chris? Like we're climbing the stairs!

Niall Fulham

Date: 5/18/2017 3:30:00 PM

Hi Darren , great job on this write fluffy fun uplifting well done Darren and Claudia ::))

Darren White
Date: 5/18/2017 10:03:00 PM

Thanks Niall (always wondering what your next avatar will be like ;)

Lisa Ricci

Date: 5/18/2017 9:52:00 AM

Hello to both authors. The formatting and layout are marvelous. You both do Free Verse proud. This is how its done by letting words and thoughts flow and unbridled. Without saying the emotive factor is present and alive. Thank you both for sharing. Congratulations on your collaboration. Well done completely and entirely. PS you have played a song for your readers.

Darren White
Date: 5/18/2017 12:55:00 PM

Hi Lisa :) you are absolutely right. The joy we have in writing together speaks here I think (and now I go sleep)