Sincerely Yours

I want to wish you a dream come true on this Christmas day...and to thank you for being a friend here...It's a blessing to share poetry with you...again...I wish you a dream come true, Maureen

"I am sincerely yours forever"... Wow... Beautiful lines...

Love this. Wildly inventive. A poem I wish I had written. Brilliant. John

The imagery here is faultless... That one person before whom we are perfect and for whom we'd always stand by. Great poem M... cheers!

Laden with images and full of emotion... the kind of poetry you'd wish to sing on your wedding night. # 7 for me my dear.

What a charming 'battle' he has to dance to and fight for/with/under; your voice is strong and life-giving:) Amitiés

I like this one just the way it is, Maureen. You didn't intend for it to be rhyming poetry so it doesn't need any changes. Hugs and forbearance with others who differ in opinion. ;-)

I think the cadence is spot on is this and the message, well you know I like it. :) Really nice Maureen

:) I like the sense of confidence and exuberance this portrays. Way to go, Maureen. Hugs

Très beaux, ma mo. It's a free verse, but it still has a rhythm to it. Absolutely beautiful, all those emotions running around in your small poem, Simply gorgeous.

Great sentiment. If you read this out loud, you can sense the cadence. You have it almost . . . the third line needs a couple more syllables- to match to line one. You could workshop this poem and find some end-line rhymes for 'tryst' (which rhymed with Optimist), battle works, but doesn't rhyme with best . Did you know rhymezone.com offers a way to find some rhyming words. Check it out.