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Sin Through the Taste of Ecstasies

May I touch that what is forbidden; That that is not mind, but to another? Like the falling leaves of autumn Blown away before sleeping. Taste of the illicit love Temptation surround Like the fallen rain Thrust upon my mouth As the voice echo. Look at what is not mind, Expectation that weren't met. Like a stone thrown across the pond A reign to my feelings. Dragged through the flow Of the running water of the river, Then deep into the soil To quench the thirst Of warm milk of the breast. Sin through the taste of ecstasies. 6/27/2020

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Date: 7/5/2020 2:34:00 PM
Your creative muse reminds me of the forbidden fruit. This one is gorgeously penned and has a sublime thought in the background Eve. Congratulations on your win. Blessings and love :)
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Date: 7/3/2020 5:36:00 AM
"Sin through the taste of ecstasies" Eve mam this poem of your is too sensual.;-) My cheeks are blushing after reading this:-D Congratulations on your win.Keep writing and keep inspiring us.Much love~Deepa
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Date: 7/2/2020 11:03:00 AM
Alluring title, luring words to be tested to zest, mmmm, nice one Eve, and congrats on your win, James :) x
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Date: 7/1/2020 11:16:00 PM
Highly sensual, Eve. Nearly explosively so!! … Ready for this: I glanced at the title and my brain registered: 'Sin through the taste of Ecclesiastes!' How 'bout that? I thought to myself: This sure ought to be interesting... And it was, and is! ... Congrats on your placement in the contest too. Take good care, Gershon
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Date: 7/1/2020 5:17:00 PM
I think i need to close my eyes.... very sensual indeed! Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Date: 6/28/2020 7:18:00 AM
A daring and well delivered illustration of what is innate to our existence, Eve. A very fine poem.
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