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Sin.

Alone, you make the heavens mute. All alone, you betray them all who once you cheered. I look to your right. I look to your left. I see the reproach which made Adam pale, in all his glory. I have learned to loathe you! Thus,i walk away, so far away; from you who made all of calvary mourn like a gruesome night.

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Date: 9/30/2009 5:34:00 PM
Interesting use of personification. Much for the reader to ponder here. Thank you for sharing your thoughts with us and for your kind commment. Keep on writing! Karen
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