K K Iloduba Jnr Poet Sonnet

Sin.

Alone, you make
the heavens mute.

All alone,
you betray them all
who once you cheered.

I look to your right.
I look to your left.
I see the reproach which made Adam pale,
in all his glory.

I have learned to loathe you!
Thus,i walk away,
so far away;
from you who made all of  calvary mourn
like a gruesome night.

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September 30, 2009 at 5:34 PM Interesting use of personification. Much for the reader to ponder here. Thank you for sharing your thoughts with us and for your kind commment. Keep on writing! Karen