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Quatern
A Quatern is a sixteen-line French form composed of four quatrains. It has a refrain that is in a different place in each quatrain. The first line of stanza one is the second line of stanza two, the third line of stanza three, and the fourth line of stanza four. A quatern has eight syllables per line. It does not have to be iambic or follow a set rhyme scheme. line 1 line 2 line 3 line 4 line 5 line 6 (line 1) line 7 line 8 line 9 line 10 line 11 (line 1) line 12 line 13 line 14 line 15 line 16 (line 1)

Succumbing to the night's allure, I greet the Goddess of the moon. And Luna rises, all aglow, elegant lady of the night. Dusk blurs the lines of light and dark, succumbing to the night's allure. And a sinking scarlet sun slips slowly over the horizon. Crimson chars the edge of the Earth as shifting shadows swiftly merge. Succumbing to the night's allure, an owl announces dusk's approach. Diamond studded ebony descends like a velvet curtain. And I am left simply spellbound, succumbing to the night's allure. 05/10/2022

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Date: 5/10/2022 12:11:00 PM
Hello Emile, I do think that a sunset over the water is so beautiful. If I were by the water I would be there for hours watching the sunset. Enjoy your day my friend.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 5/11/2022 5:34:00 AM
Hello Emile, Yes i would be by the water watching the sunset for hours. Then the next day I would go back to the water and create poetry Blessings my friend. Enjoy your day. You are welcome my friend.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 5/10/2022 12:32:00 PM
Thanks, Darlene; your comments never fail to bring a smile to my day, my friend, Emile.
Date: 5/10/2022 11:05:00 AM
Emile, you have left me spellbound after reading your marvelous quatern. Your imagery is so vivid, it is almost like an ekphrasis on the picture. Superb writing, my friend.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 5/10/2022 12:30:00 PM
Thanks, Milt; your comments have brought a smile to my day, my friend, Emile.

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