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Simple Mutterings - Only the Rain Answers

in my dream he watches and I feel his desire his need and I fear it, yet something lures me I sense him in my dark room and feel confusion it overwhelms me, I can hear his breathing close he whispers my name, it comes violently like thunder looking into his fathomless eyes I see love and hate then his lips are crushing mine, it is obsession he is evil, he is love, he is desire, he is cruelty go away, come back, I love you, I hate you he wraps his arms around me, oh the memory then the dream fades and I am left crying why does he haunt me but only the rain answers ____________________________ November 14, 2012 Poetry/Free Verse/Simple Mutterings/only the rain answers Copyright Protected, ID 11-4359-33-14 All Rights Reserved, 2012, Constance La France

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Date: 12/6/2012 6:07:00 PM
very provacative. [some men are just like that..love taunting... Light & Love
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Date: 11/24/2012 4:41:00 PM
This poem is captivating to say the least!
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Date: 11/24/2012 3:33:00 PM
A very vivid dream comes to life with your words, blessings, Carl
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Date: 11/20/2012 1:49:00 PM
Sad, but touching, but in any case wonderful! Terry
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Date: 11/18/2012 12:19:00 PM
awesome write, Constance. This must be the one you mentioned you wrote about H. Hope you are having a great weekend x
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Date: 11/16/2012 11:47:00 PM
WOW. A fave!
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Date: 11/16/2012 2:11:00 PM
enthralled by the sweet confusion of this brilliant work, dearie... i would talk in great depth how emotions spring forth from feelings and how you use delicate forms whose strength surprises the reader as they are gripped by them and pulled into your world... will soupie you soon; having health challenges since a year ago.. hope you are well!:) winning hugggs and love
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Date: 11/15/2012 1:49:00 PM
oh ... so touching .... but so beautifully written Constance. - I wish you good luck in contest. - - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/15/2012 6:15:00 AM
Such a sad write full of passion!!A great poem!
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Date: 11/14/2012 5:30:00 PM
Incredible masterpiece! Always, Laura
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Date: 11/14/2012 3:54:00 PM
I can feel the pain..Very emotive and expressive work..Sara
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Date: 11/14/2012 3:40:00 PM
I feel the incredible pain within this sad write my friend! I feel the heartache that has you calling out in pain wishing to be away from him, where you see yourself only hearing from the rain! I really enjoyed reading this incredible and wondrous poem this afternoon! What a phenomenal piece which you have masterfully written, Great Work!!
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Date: 11/14/2012 3:32:00 PM
MOST SULTRY AND QUITE PASSIONATE IN GRAND DETAIL CONSTANCE .. A MESMERIZING VISION OF ANTICIPATED LOVE MY FRIEND ..
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