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Simple Life

Simple Life Under scorching sun Struggling hard with fun Not worry for tomorrow From no one I borrow Today is the most important Nothing for me to lament I feed on my hands' work With my feet I walk I breath the fresh air To do this everyone is fair How the life is harder I'm still glad to struggle No need to boast in skycrapper No time to turn before mirror Do not want gold or silver But everyone them desires I do not long for luxury But for necessity I like singing to be happy But I hate to be sleepy I mostly prefer simple life With no one I want to fight No magnificient tomb where I die But on the same ground like all lie.

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Skat A

Date: 1/6/2016 12:57:00 PM

:) SKAT

Skat A

Date: 6/29/2013 4:10:00 PM

Mung, I agree with Richard, it is free-verse., your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers. Stopping by with a nice and sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. Hope you meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop by and say hello. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND"....... God Bless........... Hugs* SKAT

Mung Danlahpai
Date: 7/1/2013 3:57:00 AM

Thanks a lot for you praises to my poem. I so much regret for my past times before I have joined this site. I wrote many poems but there was no one to comment on my work. I just saved them. I'll upload my poems and share all you. But the best reply I expect from you is to comment my poems by your pure opinions.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 6/29/2013 12:22:00 AM

I would say free verse. I prefer this one to the other one. There is more complexity to your thought. There is also great wisdom. Welcome to the soup Mung, keep on writing. Also look up the forms and try your hand at different ones. You have a good base to build on, think of the forms as tools with which to express your poetic mind.

Mung Danlahpai
Date: 7/1/2013 3:39:00 AM

I thank you more than I can mention. Your advice is the one I passionately long for. I think Sir, you have more experiences than me because you're English native speaker. I have to learn more. I mean I should have constant study. Thanks a lot for your advice.

Mung Danlahpai

Date: 6/27/2013 9:30:00 PM

I don't know what kind of poem it is. Please make comment on it.