Poet Destroyer A Poet Free verse

Silver Haze

*                     ~Dark Silver Haze~                               *

   (side#1)                                         (side #2)

come taste life                  ----------  Heart-warming wine
old and stale,                   ----------   Jot down a line
unflavored, unpolished,      ---------   Mood changes hue
A sour, dim shade              ---------   To sweet silver blue

the lowest feeling              ---------- How high the cost
eternal gray sky               ----------  How much is lost
hollow memories               ---------- Back payment due
A sour, dim shade             ---------  To sweet silver blue 

weak limbs, overpower         ------- Head shake and sigh
moments of lights              --------  None left to deny
everything ends                 --------  Insight in view
A sour, dim shade             --------  To sweet silver blue 


torn from reality             --------   Somehow I gain
low spirits of sorrow        --------  Beauty from pain
bitter and dull,                 --------- As thoughts turn to you
A sour, dim shade           --------   To sweet silver blue


**A deep Look Into The eyes of the Poet Destroyer**

~A Tim Ryerson Collaboration~

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Paul Callus December 28, 2015 at 7:49 AM A delightful collaboration, joining young and older experiences together....and it becomes our gain, as the sour, dim blue changes to sweet silver blue! ~ All the best *~* paul

Robert Lawrence March 20, 2015 at 3:58 PM Very powerful and insightful. I like it a lot.

Elaine George July 13, 2014 at 4:06 PM Amazing how each one of us see things so differently! I really enjoyed reading this Linda. You and my friend, Tim have created a great collabortion. bfn Elaine

Andrea Dietrich July 9, 2014 at 4:07 PM Just saying hi, sweetie! Have a great day.

Robin Davis May 11, 2014 at 1:02 PM PD This is the most unique and creative write I have seen of yours. It is different but very intriguing to see the comparison of the lists. Thank you for the nice comment on my My Past poem.

Keith O.J. Hunt April 15, 2014 at 1:27 PM Very original Linda, great read!

Cherl Dunn January 5, 2014 at 11:34 PM This is one of my all time favorites of yours did you know it my friend. i love how you can play off both sides, i read this to my dark street poet my son jared and he loved it to. cheri

Jay Loveless November 26, 2013 at 11:02 PM This. Is beautiful <3 I love every moment of it.

Sheri Fresonke Harper September 11, 2013 at 3:25 PM Lovely collaboration, I like it, paints a silvery picture

Toquyen Harrell September 7, 2013 at 5:43 PM I like it, Linda. It all depends on how you look at it. Enjoyed! Have a lovely weekend, my sweet friend and thank you.

Crystal Tichenor September 6, 2013 at 9:29 AM I absolutely love this poem. I love the way it was written, not just the words, but the creative style. Everything is connected and both sides intertwine with each other as well as themselves. It's very clever. Much love to you and your talent! :)

Liam Mcdaid August 25, 2013 at 6:17 PM unusual and very beautiful piece of writing lovely style

Stephen Kilmer August 23, 2013 at 5:51 PM Love the poem and the concept. It's spiritual in a ghostly sort of way. True feeling of two people playing off of each others emotions. Nice collaboration. As always love your stuff. Satisfied... you bet sister. Kilmer

Karen Anglesey August 22, 2013 at 12:11 PM A sour dim shade to sweet silver blue... wow, awesome collaborative journey :)

Jack Jordan August 22, 2013 at 10:27 AM I really like this one, especially set up like an LP record. Jack

Lori Hopkins August 19, 2013 at 2:58 PM ahhh, "the sweet silver blue", life in Oregon~ lovely write

Laura Breidenthal August 15, 2013 at 6:50 PM Dreamy...and very creative. I quite like reading collaborations - especially ones that involve your writing. Great job PD and Tim! Always, Laura

Kelly Deschler August 8, 2013 at 4:24 PM I felt like I was in a dream world as I was reading this. It took me to someplace I have never been before. Well done! Also, thank you for reading my poem "A Fairy's Fantasy", and for the nice comments. I really appreciate it! By the way, I did enter it into your poetry contest! I can't wait to see who wins! This is the first contest I have entered on PoetrySoup.

David Scott August 8, 2013 at 11:54 AM YOU ALWAYS EXPRESS YTOUR SELF WELL MY FRIEND LOVE YOUR EMOTION HERE XXX DAVIDSCOTT

Roger Hadden August 6, 2013 at 2:46 PM A very beautiful poem. Thank you for the very nice review of my writing. Roger Dale Hadden.

Tim Ryerson August 2, 2013 at 5:04 PM Just like I told you, I'm ridin' your coat-tails dear lady, and PLEASE don't remove your coat!...Well, on SECOND thought...

Harry Horsman August 2, 2013 at 1:56 PM Wow, this reads well, so intimate, well done to you both ..

Robert Barrett July 31, 2013 at 3:06 PM Hey Poet Destroyer, this is Robert Barrett and i like you poem Silver haze. I could picture myself sittin outside just feeling life. I also pictured my self at a beach. I like your poem and you describing life in moments. I was feeling the poem and I was relaxed.

Sue-Ellen Newman July 30, 2013 at 4:25 AM This is a very interesting poetry style,, I have never seen it before,,, can you advise of the format for this poetry style,,, again enjoyed the read blessings sueellen

Gabe Shelly July 29, 2013 at 10:38 PM Art is subjective. No one can say what is bad or good only what they like or don't, and I liked this-- I'm definitely going to plagiarize you. Of course, I'll write something better like when Shakespeare stole "Hamlet" from the original author, but I'll be sure to send you a postcard of my new ferrari when they're done praising me about what a revolutionary, literary art form I came up with. Hah! Yeah baby! I love it! I'm definitely going to plagiarize you! Hahahahaha...

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