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Silver Dunes

Silver dunes mimic the moon,
Curving in peaceful crescents
Toward the sea's endless depths
To embrace darkness.

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Constance La France

November 5, 2015 at 4:18 PM

Heather, this is quite beautiful and a wonderful example for your Winter Dodoitsu contest, I hope I can create something as lovely ~

Heather Ober

November 6, 2015 at 7:14 AM

Thank you so much, Constance :) I'm really looking forward to reading your entry!

Painted Hunter

March 1, 2013 at 10:36 AM

Oh yeah...that's too cool...Awesome lines!!

Skat A

February 7, 2013 at 2:17 PM

A nice winning poem~LUV*SKAT

Isaiah Zerbst

January 13, 2013 at 9:21 AM

Glad you won! Though it is short, this one somehow makes up for it. Thanks for your encouraging words. The last two lines of the Viking poem are my favourites too.

Poet Destroyer A

January 11, 2013 at 9:58 PM

Heather... congrats..pd

Barbara Gorelick

January 11, 2013 at 12:09 AM

Like this one. congrats to you! BG

Tim Ryerson

January 10, 2013 at 10:29 PM

Elegant poem, Heather...congratulations on a well deserved win - Tim

Richard Lamoureux

January 9, 2013 at 11:35 PM

Way to go Heather!

Seren Roberts

January 9, 2013 at 10:10 PM

Nice one Heather ...Seren

Joyce Johnson

January 9, 2013 at 8:30 PM

Very nice Heather. Great win. Congratulations. Love, Joyce

Kash Poet

January 9, 2013 at 6:40 PM

I have to read your ALL poems!

Kash Poet

January 9, 2013 at 6:37 PM

Just amazing!Congrats on the win!

Sara Kendrick

January 9, 2013 at 4:39 PM

Congrats on your great win..Sara

Debbie Guzzi

January 9, 2013 at 2:47 PM

A very special write! Congrad's on your win! Light & Love

Audrey Haick

January 9, 2013 at 2:17 PM

Congratulations on your fantastic win, Heather! Beautiful painting...Always, Annalise

Mehnaz Veetil

January 9, 2013 at 1:48 PM

Congrats Heather, beautiful poem you have penned here...

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

January 9, 2013 at 1:04 PM

Congratulations Heather on your winning top spot xx

Sheri Fresonke Harper

December 3, 2012 at 9:02 PM

Heather, hmm, very gorgeous, I love the ocean and you capture how they look at night, I wish you luck in the contest!

James Tate

December 2, 2012 at 3:17 PM

Heather, you grasped the meaningful verbiage here and made a very good poem. Good luch on the contest. Thanks for your comments on my Autumn Daunting Goes.