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Silver Dunes

Silver dunes mimic the moon, Curving in peaceful crescents Toward the sea's endless depths To embrace darkness.

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Constance La France

Date: 11/5/2015 4:18:00 PM

Heather, this is quite beautiful and a wonderful example for your Winter Dodoitsu contest, I hope I can create something as lovely ~

Heather Ober
Date: 11/6/2015 7:14:00 AM

Thank you so much, Constance :) I'm really looking forward to reading your entry!

Painted Hunter

Date: 3/1/2013 10:36:00 AM

Oh yeah...that's too cool...Awesome lines!!

Skat A

Date: 2/7/2013 2:17:00 PM

A nice winning poem~LUV*SKAT

Isaiah Zerbst

Date: 1/13/2013 9:21:00 AM

Glad you won! Though it is short, this one somehow makes up for it. Thanks for your encouraging words. The last two lines of the Viking poem are my favourites too.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/11/2013 9:58:00 PM

Heather... congrats..pd

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 1/11/2013 12:09:00 AM

Like this one. congrats to you! BG

Tim Ryerson

Date: 1/10/2013 10:29:00 PM

Elegant poem, Heather...congratulations on a well deserved win - Tim

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 1/9/2013 11:35:00 PM

Way to go Heather!

Seren Roberts

Date: 1/9/2013 10:10:00 PM

Nice one Heather ...Seren

Joyce Johnson

Date: 1/9/2013 8:30:00 PM

Very nice Heather. Great win. Congratulations. Love, Joyce

Kash Poet

Date: 1/9/2013 6:40:00 PM

I have to read your ALL poems!

Kash Poet

Date: 1/9/2013 6:37:00 PM

Just amazing!Congrats on the win!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/9/2013 4:39:00 PM

Congrats on your great win..Sara

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 1/9/2013 2:47:00 PM

A very special write! Congrad's on your win! Light & Love

Audrey Haick

Date: 1/9/2013 2:17:00 PM

Congratulations on your fantastic win, Heather! Beautiful painting...Always, Annalise

Mehnaz Veetil

Date: 1/9/2013 1:48:00 PM

Congrats Heather, beautiful poem you have penned here...

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 1/9/2013 1:04:00 PM

Congratulations Heather on your winning top spot xx

Sheri Fresonke Harper

Date: 12/3/2012 9:02:00 PM

Heather, hmm, very gorgeous, I love the ocean and you capture how they look at night, I wish you luck in the contest!

James Tate

Date: 12/2/2012 3:17:00 PM

Heather, you grasped the meaningful verbiage here and made a very good poem. Good luch on the contest. Thanks for your comments on my Autumn Daunting Goes.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/22/2012 2:06:00 PM

Ahhh!!I do like this one..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..I am glad that I chose this one to read today..Thanks for your kindly visit to my work.Sara

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/19/2012 10:32:00 PM

LOVE this one. I'm gonna fave it!!

Mark Goodson

Date: 11/19/2012 8:37:00 AM

OOOOOO! I like this Heather!