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Silken Black Feathers

silken black raven 

gazes upon whimsical

waxing moon’s shadows

 7/13/2015

moonravenhaiku

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Paul Callus

Date: 7/19/2015 4:03:00 PM

Delightfully dark haiku, Eve! A most deserved winner! Congratulations. hugs // paul

Kim Merryman

Date: 7/17/2015 9:41:00 PM

This has an eerie tone to it. Congrats on your fantastic first place win, Eve! Love, Kim

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 7/17/2015 8:24:00 AM

Cool! Congrats on your top honour.

Alexis Y.

Date: 7/16/2015 1:44:00 PM

Eve, this is lovely. Congratulations on you big win:-)Alexis

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 7/16/2015 11:25:00 AM

lovely Eve congrats on win hugs 7

Carrie Richards

Date: 7/16/2015 9:30:00 AM

So unique, and a bit mysterious !! Well done, Eve !! Congratulations!!

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 7/16/2015 7:50:00 AM

Beautiful write - awesome win! congratulations and a 7, my friend! Pandita

Judy Konos

Date: 7/16/2015 7:31:00 AM

Congratulations...Big Big 7....

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 7/16/2015 4:21:00 AM

Wow...a most wonderful take on the Feathers contest Eve. I see why this is a top winner! Congratulations! Excellent haiku! 7

Jan Allison

Date: 7/16/2015 2:38:00 AM

WOW many congrats Eve:-) hugs Jan xx

Kp Nunez

Date: 7/16/2015 12:48:00 AM

Just beautiful lines there, Eve. Congratulations! hugs

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/15/2015 11:26:00 PM

I see this won. BIG congrats,

Lee Carter

Date: 7/15/2015 11:14:00 PM

Congrats eve!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/15/2015 11:12:00 PM

Eve, Congratulations on your wonderful win. Always ~LINDA~

Viv Wigley

Date: 7/15/2015 10:44:00 PM

Great win, Eve, well done. Viv x

Skat A

Date: 7/15/2015 10:42:00 PM

Eve, glad you are enjoying this win. :) Congratulations on your awesome feather win. **SKAT**

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/14/2015 4:09:00 PM

nice descriptions for the moon and its shadows!

Eve Roper
Date: 7/14/2015 4:24:00 PM

Thank you, Andrea, for your complement . I struggled with this one I was told a Haiku is supposed to be about nature but happy. Hugs Eve

Constance La France

Date: 7/14/2015 10:22:00 AM

Eve, beautiful picture and words and thanks for visiting my poem, happy kitty

Eve Roper
Date: 7/14/2015 4:23:00 PM

Thank you, B.W., for your complement. I struggled with this one as you know a Haiku is supposed to be about nature but :~) happy. Hugs Eve

David Meade

Date: 7/14/2015 9:38:00 AM

I love this haiku, waxing moon shadows create so many images within my imagination. Well done my dear friend. 7

Eve Roper
Date: 7/14/2015 4:22:00 PM

Thank you, David, for your complement and the 7. I struggled with this one I was told a Haiku is supposed to be about nature but happy :~). Missed you Hugs Eve