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Silk, the Rose

Silk, the rose passed gently along my ache where long dormant senses wake every move you make most incredible as whispered eyes move close to rest Pain, you have lain too long through the recesses of my time Rewind, I have taken back my mind as fingers glide towards the spine worn down pages flipped over and the hunger fades the blues No sequels written, it is as if ... satin slides the night touches wont ignite

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Date: 6/28/2017 8:52:00 PM
Romantic but also very contemplative, beautiful write!
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Date: 6/26/2017 10:10:00 PM
SO nostalgic and romantic. That fourth part is wow! also I love "satin slides the night"
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Date: 6/26/2017 10:02:00 PM
Beautiful...just amazing, Tim. I love it!
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Date: 6/26/2017 10:00:00 PM
Reads of deep sadness, Tim. Perhaps you can write a sequel, my friend. Very stirring write!
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Date: 6/26/2017 9:49:00 PM
tenderly sad but I feel the need and hunger
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Date: 6/26/2017 5:58:00 PM
This is the first poem I have read this morning! And may I say it has ignited my soul ablaze!
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Date: 6/26/2017 4:17:00 PM
Your words as so full of passion Tim but there is a sense of sadness in the final lines:-( hugs Jan xx
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Date: 6/26/2017 3:45:00 PM
I see passion, longing and sadness with restriction all in this deep write. Well done :)
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Date: 6/26/2017 3:21:00 PM
Yes, satin slides the night, so beautifully written, and so sad my friend.
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Date: 6/26/2017 1:38:00 PM
This has the feel of beginning something again, I am not too sure, I can feel a certain passion but also a push back of sorts. Nicely done.
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Date: 6/26/2017 1:32:00 PM
This is amazingly passionate.
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Date: 6/26/2017 1:24:00 PM
- The senses wake ... soft silk romance - Beautifully written, Tim - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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