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Silk Drums

my heart beats echoes in the night resounding louder loudest emphatic blaring till deafening thundering causing me a fright intensifying drumming stirring a life of its own rhythms surrounding me pulsating dancing and hovering round and round spinning silk thread wrapping me tight in its cocoon AP: Honorable Mention 2020, Honorable Mention 2020 Submitted on January 4, 2019 for contest 2019 POETRY MARATHON MILE 9 sponsored by MARK TONEY

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Timothy Mcguire

Date: 1/10/2019 2:37:00 AM

So we'll done! I'm gob smacked!

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 1/5/2019 8:49:00 AM

I love the building momentum, excellent composition. Enjoyed :) xomo!

Line Gauthier
Date: 1/5/2019 9:08:00 AM

Thank you so much, Maureen. Most appreciated.

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 1/4/2019 9:41:00 PM

love your metaphoric poem, good luck in the contest, Line.

Line Gauthier
Date: 1/4/2019 9:49:00 PM

Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Caren.

Kyle Kriticos

Date: 1/4/2019 8:48:00 PM

Hey Line long time no see! This is my kind of poem I like the rhythm. It flows very well. One of those poems you can really hear with emphasis in your head as you read it ! Kudos !

Line Gauthier
Date: 1/4/2019 9:25:00 PM

Thanks for your most appreciated visit and comment, Kyle. Happy New Year!